Science— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Сократите повторения, исправьте грамматику и сделайте ответ более связным: начните с четкого тематического предложения, затем приведите одно-два конкретных объяснения. Избегайте тавтологии («we don't often study science» и «we study sometimes math...») и неправильных конструкций («teach us to science» → «teach science to us»).

Example: Yes, I enjoy science because I find experiments interesting. However, at my school it is not very popular since few teachers are confident teaching science, so classes are limited and we often focus more on subjects like math and English.

Suggestion: Сделайте ответ короче и яснее: начните с прямого ответа, затем кратко объясните причину и приведите пример. Избегайте словосочетаний «I'm not keen on science very much» и «all themes» — используйте «find science difficult» и конкретизируйте, какие аспекты трудны.

Example: Not really. I rarely use scientific knowledge day-to-day because I find some concepts difficult, and I prefer subjects like art. For example, I use artistic skills when drawing, but I rarely apply physics or chemistry at home.

Suggestion: Упорядочьте мысль: ответьте на вопрос прямо, укажите конкретную область науки и объясните причину. Исправьте ошибки и тавтологии («weak weaknesses») и ненужные вставки. Используйте связку «because» для объяснения.

Example: Yes, I would like to learn more about technology, especially digital devices and programming, because I lack knowledge in that area and want to improve my skills for future jobs.

Suggestion: Сформулируйте аргумент яснее и избегайте повторов («should should», повтор «socialize»). Начните с мнения, затем приведите 1–2 конкретные причины с примером. Используйте корректные выражения: «fundamental subject» → «a fundamental subject».

Example: Yes, I think science is a fundamental subject because it teaches critical thinking and problem-solving. For instance, basic scientific knowledge can help you understand health information or technology used at work.

Suggestion: Упростите и конкретизируйте: начните с прямого ответа, добавьте причину и пример. Уберите лишние повторы («I would I would», «more educated») и используйте «learn new things» или «gain knowledge».

Example: Not often, but I would like to watch science programs in my free time because they can teach me new ideas. For example, a documentary about space or biology would help me understand recent discoveries and improve my general knowledge.

× I really enjoy studying science, but it's not a popular subject in my school because teachers cannot teach us to science very well.

✓ I really enjoy studying science, but it's not a popular subject at my school because the teachers cannot teach science very well.

The preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to a school (problem type 11). 'Teach us to science' is incorrect: English uses 'teach (subject)' or 'teach us (how) to do something' (problem type 26). Also add the definite article 'the' before 'teachers' for specificity (problem type 22). Suggestion: use 'at my school', 'the teachers', and 'teach science' instead of 'teach us to science'.

× That's why we don't often study science, we study sometimes math or English and other.

✓ That's why we don't often study science; sometimes we study math or English and other subjects.

Adverb placement: 'don't often study' is acceptable but 'we study sometimes' should be 'sometimes we study' or 'we sometimes study' for natural word order (problem type 20). Sentence is run-on; use a semicolon or period to separate independent clauses (problem type 26). 'Other' needs a noun: 'other subjects' (problem type 13/26). Suggestion: use 'sometimes we study' and include the noun 'subjects'.

× I don't think I do that in my daily life because I'm not keen on science very much, that's why.

✓ I don't think I use it in my daily life because I'm not very keen on science.

Pronoun reference: 'do that' is vague; use 'use it' to refer to 'science knowledge' (problem type 12). Adverb order: 'not very keen' is the correct order (problem type 6/13). The clause 'that's why' is redundant at the end and creates awkward punctuation (problem type 26). Suggestion: replace 'do that' with 'use it' and move adverb 'very' before 'keen'.

× And science is a bit difficult for me to understand all themes in science instead of I prefer art or other subjects.

✓ Science is a bit difficult for me; I find it hard to understand all the topics in science, and I prefer art and other subjects.

Awkward structure: 'difficult for me to understand all themes in science' should be reorganized to 'I find it hard to understand all the topics in science' (problem type 26). 'Instead of I prefer' is ungrammatical; use 'and I prefer' to connect preferences (problem type 16). 'Themes' is less natural than 'topics' here (problem type 13). Suggestion: split into two sentences or use a semicolon and use 'topics' and 'prefer'.

× Yes, I would like to study science. Which topic is that technology I'm I am lack of information about technology and I always try to improve my weak weaknesses that's why I would like to study this theme.

✓ Yes, I would like to study science. I lack information about technology and I always try to improve my weaknesses, so I would like to study this topic.

'Which topic is that technology' is ungrammatical; rephrase to state the idea clearly (problem type 26). 'I'm I am lack' mixes contractions and full forms and uses wrong verb form; correct is 'I lack' (problem type 9/6). 'Weak weaknesses' is redundant; use 'weaknesses' (problem type 13). 'Theme' is better as 'topic' in this context (problem type 13). Use 'so' instead of 'that's why' to connect clauses smoothly. Suggestion: say 'I lack information about technology...so I would like to study this topic.'

× I consider that science is fundamental subject in area of education.

✓ I consider that science is a fundamental subject in the area of education.

Missing article 'a' before 'fundamental subject' (problem type 22). 'In area of education' needs the definite article 'the' and natural phrasing 'the area of education' (problem type 11/22). Suggestion: include appropriate articles: 'a fundamental subject in the area of education'.

× That's why every people should should learn science.

✓ That's why everyone should learn science.

'Every people' is incorrect; use 'everyone' or 'every person' (problem type 12/13). Duplicate 'should should' is a typo and must be reduced to one 'should' (problem type 26). Suggestion: use 'everyone should learn science'.

× It will be helpful when you are around people who are more educated and you will be easily socialized with them.

✓ It will be helpful when you are around people who are more educated, and you will be able to socialize with them easily.

'Socialized with them' is awkward; use 'socialize with them' and place adverb 'easily' after the verb or at the end (problem types 13 and 20). 'You will be easily socialized' uses passive incorrectly; better as active 'you will be able to socialize' (problem type 21). Suggestion: use active voice and correct adverb placement.

× You will easily socialize with them.

✓ You will be able to socialize with them easily.

This sentence repeats the previous idea; phrasing is acceptable but 'be able to' clarifies ability and 'easily' placement is more natural at the end (problem type 26/20). Suggestion: combine with previous sentence to avoid repetition.

× I'm I don't often watch scientific programs, but I would like to watch them when I have free time in the future, because if they are very interesting for me, I would I would learn a lot of new things and I will be more educated.

✓ I don't often watch scientific programs, but I would like to watch them when I have free time, because if they are very interesting, I would learn a lot of new things and become more knowledgeable.

'I'm I don't' is an error mixing forms; use only 'I don't' (problem type 26). 'In the future' is redundant with 'when I have free time'; remove or simplify (problem type 26). 'Interesting for me' is better as 'interesting' without 'for me' (problem type 13). Duplicate 'I would I would' is a typo; remove repetition (problem type 26). 'Be more educated' is less natural than 'become more knowledgeable' (word choice). Suggestion: simplify the sentence, remove duplicates, and use natural collocations like 'become more knowledgeable'.