Dreams— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 句子有语法和用词错误，表达不够自然且信息重复。需要用正确时态和更简洁的结构回应，再补充一两句具体细节。建议用一到两句主题句说明是否记得梦境，然后用一到两句具体细节支持。

Example: Yes, I can remember some childhood dreams. For example, I wanted to be a famous painter and used to draw many pictures; I even won several prizes at school art competitions.

Suggestion: 回答较自然但重复前后信息，应直接回应“是否分享”，并用连贯的细节支持。注意介词和时态（at university 而不是 in the university；share with 而不是 share to）。可以用连接词使逻辑更清晰并控制句子数量。

Example: Yes, I often share my dreams with close friends. For instance, when I wanted to be a writer at university, I told my best friend and she encouraged me, promising to buy my books one day.

Suggestion: 观点明确但语言有语法错误和表达冗长。建议先给出简短理由，再用具体例子支持。注意时态（these years / over the years），以及介词用法（earn a living rather than earn myself）。

Example: Yes, I think dreams can give people direction and motivation. For example, my dream to become a writer pushed me to keep writing after graduation, and over the years I have managed to earn a living from my work.

Suggestion: 回答重复之前内容，缺少直接回应“Do you want”现在时的态度表述。建议先用现在时明确表达愿望或现状，然后补充具体成果或计划，避免用词错误（earn a living；at university）。

Example: Yes, I still want my dreams to come true. In fact, I pursued writing after university, and now I earn a living from it and have a growing number of followers and readers.

× Well, when I was a little child I dreamed to be a famous painter and I drawed so many pictures and I've got so many prizes on painting.

✓ Well, when I was a little child I dreamed of becoming a famous painter, and I drew so many pictures and I got so many prizes for painting.

错误类型：动词过去分词/不规则动词与短语搭配问题。 说明： 1) “dreamed to be” 不符合英语习惯，应使用短语 “dream of + -ing” 或 “dreamed of becoming”。建议改为 “dreamed of becoming a famous painter”。 2) “drawed” 是不规则动词 draw 的错误过去式，正确形式为 “drew”。 3) “I've got so many prizes on painting” 表达不自然，应该使用过去式 “I got so many prizes for painting” 或 “I won so many prizes for my paintings”。 改进建议：记住常见不规则动词（draw→drew→drawn）；dream 常跟 of + 动名词；表示获奖用 win/get + prizes for + 名词或 for + 动名词。

× Yes, I wanted to become a famous writer in the university, so I shared my dream to my best friend and she told me that I should keep on writing and she will buy my books in the future.

✓ Yes, I wanted to become a famous writer at university, so I shared my dream with my best friend and she told me that I should keep on writing and she would buy my books in the future.

错误类型：介词使用不当和时态问题。 说明： 1) “in the university” 在此处更自然的表达是 “at university”（表示在大学期间/就读于大学），除非指具体某所大学才用 the。 2) “shared my dream to my best friend” 中应使用介词 with 表示与某人分享：share something with someone。 3) 原句后半部分“she will buy my books in the future” 与前半句过去背景不一致，改为 would 更符合间接引语/当时说的话的语境。若强调现在将来可用 will，但上下文更自然用过去视角的 would。 改进建议：注意常见搭配 share with；区分 at university 与 in the university；注意时态一致性（过去背景下用 would）。

× Yes, people who had a dream can make more effort to make it true. For instance, I wanted to be a famous writer at university, so after my graduation, I kept on writing this years and I can earn myself by writing now.

✓ Yes, people who have a dream can make more effort to make it come true. For instance, I wanted to be a famous writer at university, so after my graduation, I kept on writing these years and now I can earn a living by writing.

错误类型：时态与词汇搭配问题。 说明： 1) “people who had a dream” 如果表达普遍真理应使用现在完成或一般现在，“have a dream” 更合适；“had” 会让意思偏向过去特定时间。这里改为 “have a dream”。 2) “make it true” 搭配不太自然，应为 “make it come true”。 3) “kept on writing this years” 中 “this years” 不正确，应为 “these years” 或更自然的 “over the years” 表示多年来持续写作。过去持续动作用 kept on writing 正确，但要与时间短语匹配。 4) “I can earn myself by writing now” 中 “earn myself” 用法错误，正确表达为 “earn a living by writing” 或 “support myself by writing”。 改进建议：注意时态一致性（普遍事实用现在时）；记忆固定搭配 like make sth come true、earn a living、these/over the years。

× Yes, I wanted to be a famous writer at the university, so I kept writing over these years and now I can earn myself by writing and I have a lot of followers and readers.

✓ Yes, I wanted to be a famous writer at university, so I kept writing over the years and now I can support myself by writing, and I have a lot of followers and readers.

错误类型：时态与词语搭配问题。 说明： 1) “at the university” 建议改为 “at university” 除非指特定大学。两次出现可统一表达。 2) “over these years” 应为 “over the years” 或 “over these years” 中更自然的是 “over the years”。 3) “earn myself by writing” 是错误搭配，应为 “support myself by writing” 或 “earn a living by writing”。 4) 整句时态切换要清晰：过去的愿望（wanted）、过去的持续行动（kept writing）、现在的结果（now I can ...）。 改进建议：使用正确搭配 support/earn a living；注意时间短语用法（over the years）。