Hometown— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary (e.g. 'hometown' not 'hotel'), and avoid asking questions back. Combine short fragments into one or two coherent sentences and give one specific detail (distance, landscape or climate). Use linking words for flow.

Ejemplo: My hometown is Udon Thani in the northeast of Thailand, about seven hours by bus from Bangkok. It’s a rural area surrounded by farmland, so it feels peaceful and close to nature.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct topic sentence stating what you like, then give two specific supporting details with linking words. Correct grammar (e.g. 'because it is a small rural town') and use precise adjectives ('fresh air', 'friendly locals'). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I love my hometown because it’s a small rural town with very clean, fresh air. Also, the locals are friendly and helpful, so it always feels safe and welcoming.

Sugerencia: Use correct tense and a clear structure: state the period you lived there, then explain your current situation. Use linking words like 'after that' or 'since' to connect ideas and keep sentences concise.

Ejemplo: I lived in my hometown for about 18 years. After that I moved to Bangkok, and I have been living here for the past 10 years.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use appropriate vocabulary (e.g. 'good fit', 'fresh air', 'compared with cities'). Provide a balanced view with a reason and an example, using linking words ('however', 'because'). Avoid vague or incorrect words like 'fish air' or 'velocity'.

Ejemplo: Yes, it can be a good fit for some young people because of the green environment and fresh air. However, there are fewer job opportunities and limited entertainment compared with big cities, so many young people move away for work.

× My hotel is Urontian which is in the northeast of Thailand, far from Bangkok. 7 hours by bus. Is it a rural area surrounded by farmland and follies so it's feel peaceful and cold to nature?

✓ My hometown is Urontian, which is in the northeast of Thailand, far from Bangkok; it is seven hours away by bus. It is a rural area surrounded by farmland and forests, so it feels peaceful and close to nature.

Multiple sentence structure problems: 'My hotel' is incorrect for 'hometown' (word choice), a fragment '7 hours by bus' lacks a verb and number should be written as words in formal speech; 'Is it a rural area...' is an incorrect question form in this context and 'it's feel' mixes contraction and verb form. Also 'follies' is likely a wrong word for 'forests'. Suggestion: use complete sentences with subject and verb, correct noun choice, and correct verb forms (it is/it feels). Use commas and connectors to join related ideas.

× I really love my hometown because is it as a more rural town with clean fresh air in addition to local people are really friendly so it feels safe and welcoming.

✓ I really love my hometown because it is a rural town with clean, fresh air, and the local people are very friendly, so it feels safe and welcoming.

This sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary words. 'Because is it as a more rural town' has subject-verb inversion and extra words 'as' and 'more' that are unnecessary. Also 'local people are really friendly' needed a connector. Suggestion: keep subject before verb ('it is'), remove redundant comparatives unless comparing, and join clauses with commas and conjunctions. Add commas between adjectives 'clean, fresh'.

× I live in my hometown for about 18 years. I then moved to Bangkok and I have now been living in Bangkok for 10 years.

✓ I lived in my hometown for about 18 years. I then moved to Bangkok, and I have now been living in Bangkok for 10 years.

The duration in the past requires the past simple 'lived' because the action is completed when followed by 'then moved'. The second clause correctly uses present perfect continuous to indicate ongoing residence. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past periods and present perfect (or present perfect continuous) for actions that continue to the present.

× Yes, I think it can be a good pit for young people because of the green environment and fish air. However, the opportunities are and entertainment are limited compared with velocity.

✓ Yes, I think it can be a good place for young people because of the green environment and fresh air. However, job opportunities and entertainment are limited compared with the city.

Multiple incorrect words: 'pit' should be 'place'; 'fish air' is a wrong word for 'fresh air'; 'the opportunities are and entertainment are limited' has extra words and wrong order; 'velocity' is an incorrect word for 'city'. Suggestion: choose correct nouns/adjectives, order noun phrases properly ('job opportunities and entertainment'), and use the correct comparison object ('city'). Also ensure parallel structure in the list.