Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は直接的で内容は関連していますが、文法と語順、語彙の選択に改善が必要です。具体的には、冗長なフィラー（uh）を減らし、動詞の時制と句の構造（make copy → write copy / create the promotional for a year → create promotional materials for the year）を正しく使う練習をしてください。また、一文で答えを明確に提示し、1～2文の具体例をつけるとよいです。練習方法：毎回の回答でフィラーを意識的に避け、動詞と目的語を正確に組み立てる練習（例：I write copy for advertisements and create promotional materials for the year.）を繰り返してください。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I work in marketing, so I often write copy for advertisements and create promotional materials for the year.

Sugerencia: 正直な気持ちを述べている点は良いですが、文法と表現が不自然です。'There will be honest'は間違いで、'To be honest'を使うべきです。理由を述べる際は具体例（どんなAIツールを使うか、どのような書類か）を1～2文で付け加えると効果的です。語彙は『documents』や『help me draft』など適切な表現に置き換えてください。練習方法：To be honestで始め、理由→具体例の順に短く整理して話す練習をしてください。

Ejemplo: To be honest, I don't feel very confident about my writing, so I sometimes use AI tools to help me draft documents, such as ad copies or reports.

Sugerencia: 意図は伝わりますが、時制と語法の誤りが多いです。過去の職務について話すときは『when I worked』とし、'I made some copy'や『seasonal promotions』など自然な語彙を使ってください。また、因果関係を明確にする接続詞（so / therefore / to encourage）を使うと論理がはっきりします。練習方法：過去の経験を説明する際に時制を確認し、理由と結果をつなぐ短いフレーズを入れる練習をしてください。

Ejemplo: Yes. When I worked in marketing at a Japanese convenience store, I wrote advertising copy. For example, in the summertime we created seasonal promotions to encourage customers to buy more cold drinks and snacks.

Sugerencia: 意味は明確ですが、'used to handwriting'や'more fast'は不自然です。正しくは『used to handwrite』や『faster』を使います。比較表現を加えて、理由に具体性（例えば、speed, editing, storage）を持たせるとより説得力が出ます。練習方法：prefersの表現と比較級の正しい使い方を意識して短い理由を2文以内で述べる練習をしてください。

Ejemplo: I used to handwrite, but now I prefer typing because it's faster and makes editing and storing documents much easier.

Sugerencia: 回答の構成は良いですが、文法と語順、語彙の大文字遣い（diariesは小文字）に注意が必要です。'when I was childhood'は『when I was a child』が正しく、'I kept a diary for six years'のように自然な表現を使いましょう。さらに頻度に関する具体的な情報（e.g., daily, weekly）を付ければ説得力が増します。練習方法：過去の習慣を述べる際の定型表現（I used to / I kept a diary every day）を使った短文練習をしましょう。

Ejemplo: I don't keep a diary nowadays, but when I was a child I kept one every day for about six years.

Sugerencia: 言いたいことは分かりますが、語彙選択と表現が不自然です。'taking further and videos'は意味不明で、おそらく'photos and videos'のことです。また、'purchased my video on Instagram'は間違いで、'post'や'upload'、'share'などが適切です。具体的にどんな写真や短い説明を付けるかを述べると良いです。練習方法：使う語彙（photos, videos, post, upload, check previous posts）を正しく使い、どのくらいの頻度でそれをするかを1文で説明する練習をしてください。

Ejemplo: I prefer taking photos and videos to record my life. I often upload them to Instagram and occasionally look back at my previous posts to remember past events.

× Yes I do because my job is marketing so sometimes I make uh copy for advertisement under create the promotional for a year.

✓ Yes, I do because my job is in marketing, so sometimes I write copy for advertisements and create promotional materials for the year.

The original sentence has structural issues and missing prepositions/articles. 'job is marketing' should be 'job is in marketing'. 'make copy for advertisement' should be 'write copy for advertisements'. 'under create the promotional for a year' is unclear and rephrased to 'create promotional materials for the year'. Punctuation and commas are added for clarity.

× There will be honest, I don't have confidence with writing, so sometimes I use AI to make some document.

✓ To be honest, I don't have confidence in my writing, so sometimes I use AI to create documents.

'There will be honest' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'To be honest'. 'confidence with writing' should be 'confidence in my writing'. 'make some document' should be 'create documents' (plural and more natural verb choice). Present tense and noun forms adjusted.

× Yes I do. When I was work in Japanese convenience store as marketing I make some copy.

✓ Yes, I do. When I worked at a Japanese convenience store in marketing, I wrote some copy.

Tense and verb forms were incorrect. 'was work' should be past tense 'worked'. Preposition 'at' is needed for location. 'as marketing' should be 'in marketing' or 'as a marketer'. 'I make' should be past 'I wrote' to match 'When I worked'.

× In the summertime, it's encouraged customer to buy products.

✓ In the summertime, it encourages customers to buy products.

'it's encouraged customer' is ungrammatical passive/subject mismatch. Use active 'it encourages customers'. Plural 'customers' fits general statement. No article needed before 'summertime' but sentence restructured for correctness.

× Previously I used to handwriting, but nowadays I prefer typing because it's more fast.

✓ Previously I used to handwrite, but nowadays I prefer typing because it's faster.

'used to handwriting' is incorrect; use verb 'handwrite' or phrase 'write by hand'. 'more fast' is wrong comparative; use 'faster'.

× Nowadays I don't write, uh, Diaries, but when I was childhood, I continued to write Diaries for six years.

✓ Nowadays I don't keep diaries, but when I was a child, I wrote a diary for six years.

'write Diaries' is awkward; 'keep diaries' or 'keep a diary' is natural. 'when I was childhood' needs article 'a child'. Use past 'wrote' and singular 'a diary' or 'diaries' consistently; 'wrote a diary for six years' is clear.

× I prefer taking further and videos. Sometimes I purchased my video on Instagram and sometimes I checked previous post.

✓ I prefer taking photos and videos. Sometimes I post my videos on Instagram and sometimes I check previous posts.

'taking further' is wrong word; intended 'photos'. 'purchased my video on Instagram' is incorrect verb; use 'post'. 'checked previous post' should be 'check previous posts' for tense and plurality consistency.