Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more fluent and grammatical: produce a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds (um, uh) and correct tense/word forms ("air conditioner", "helps me relax after a long day at school"). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner in my room. It works frequently during hot weather and helps me relax and sleep comfortably after a long day at school. Because it cools the room quickly, I can study more effectively in the evenings.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then give specific reasons with correct grammar. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct verb forms ("helped", "used to"). Avoid repetitions and fillers. Mention concrete effects (time saved, less physical strain).

Ejemplo: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important. For example, my mother used to wash clothes by hand every day, but the washing machine now saves her several hours each week. Because of this, she has more free time and less physical strain.

Sugerencia: Make a simple, direct statement and clarify reason. Use correct grammar and avoid confusing negatives. One or two sentences are enough: say whether you read instructions and why. Provide a short example if possible.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine. Reading the manual helps me understand how to operate it safely and avoid damaging the appliance.

Sugerencia: Be concise and precise: state your opinion then give a clear reason using linking words (because, so). Use correct vocabulary ("operate", "safely", "prevent damage"). Keep to 1–2 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is important to read instructions because they explain how to operate the machine safely and prevent damage. As a result, you can use the device correctly and avoid costly repairs.

× I think that the air condition in my room, I use it pretty, uh, frequently.

✓ I think that the air conditioner in my room, I use it pretty frequently.

The student used 'air condition' (countable) instead of the correct noun 'air conditioner' (singular). Use the correct singular noun for the appliance. Suggestion: replace 'air condition' with 'air conditioner' and remove unnecessary commas.

× So, umm, it had me, uh, relax, comfortable.

✓ So, umm, it helps me feel relaxed and comfortable.

The student used past tense 'had' incorrectly and an incorrect verb structure 'had me relax'. The intended meaning is a present habitual effect, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate. Also use the adjective 'relaxed' after 'feel'. Suggestion: use 'helps me feel relaxed and comfortable.'

× I uh, when is hard and after busy day from school.

✓ I use it when the weather is hot or after a busy day at school.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject-verb structure and has incorrect word order and prepositions ('after busy day from school'). Reconstruct the sentence with a clear subject 'I use it' and correct preposition 'at school'. Also clarify 'when is hard' to 'when the weather is hot' if that was intended.

× Of course, my mother really liked it and I think it helped my mother, uh, can uh, have more free time more than uh, in the past.

✓ Of course, my mother really liked it and I think it helped her have more free time than in the past.

The student repeats 'my mother' and mixes tenses and modal forms ('helped my mother, uh, can uh, have'). Use the pronoun 'her' to avoid repetition and maintain past tense 'helped her have' or present perfect if appropriate. Remove unnecessary 'can'.

× My mother have to lo do laundry every day by hand.

✓ My mother had to do laundry every day by hand.

The verb 'have' does not agree with singular subject 'my mother'; and context indicates past habit so 'had to' is correct. Also fix typo 'lo' to 'to' and remove extra word. Suggestion: 'My mother had to do laundry every day by hand.'

× It's so very uh tie.

✓ It was very tiring.

The student used 'tie' which is incorrect; the intended adjective is 'tiring' to describe the activity. Also match tense with previous sentence (past) using 'was'. Suggestion: 'It was very tiring.'

× Of course, if you don't read didn't break instruction before using the machine, I, I, I couldn't umm, now to use it and umm, now the now is, umm, useful, uh, is.

✓ Of course. If you don't read the instructions before using the machine, you might break it. I couldn't use it properly before, but now it is useful.

The original mixes negative forms 'don't' and 'didn't', lacks articles ('the instructions'), and has unclear pronouns and tense. Separate into clear sentences: conditional present 'If you don't read...' plus likely result 'you might break it.' Then state personal experience in past and present. Suggestion: use clear conditional structure and consistent tense.

× Of course, as might talk about instruction have a earth now how to operate the machine and and now is.

✓ Of course. As I mentioned, the instructions tell you how to operate the machine, and now it is easy to use.

The sentence has missing articles ('the instructions'), unclear words ('have a earth now'), and broken structure. Replace 'as might talk about' with 'as I mentioned' and use 'the instructions tell you how to operate the machine'. Clarify final clause to 'now it is easy to use.'