Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 답변은 자연스럽고 핵심을 잘 전달했지만 좀 더 구조화하고 간결하게 말하면 더 좋습니다. 예를 들어 주제 문장을 명확히 한 뒤 이유나 방법을 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 중복 표현(Notes app, check whenever I need 등)을 줄이고 하나의 구체적 예시(예: 캘린더 알림)를 포함하면 응답이 더 설득력 있어집니다.

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things, so I rely on my phone to keep me organised. For example, I use the Notes app and set calendar reminders for important appointments, which helps me avoid forgetting tasks.

Sugerencia: 이야기를 잘 전달했지만 문법(단수·복수, 시제)과 문장 구조를 다듬어야 합니다. 구체적인 세부사항(언제, 뭐 때문에 잊었는지, 어떻게 해결했는지)을 한두 문장으로 덧붙이면 더 좋습니다. 연결어도 사용해 문장이 자연스럽게 이어지게 하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes. Once in middle school I forgot a promise to meet a friend after class because I got caught up studying. As a result she was upset, so I apologised and promised to make it up by planning a new study session together.

Sugerencia: 핵심을 잘 말했지만 좀 더 구체적인 예시와 연결어를 사용해 내용을 풍부하게 하세요. 예를 들어 어떤 종류의 약속이나 생일 준비에서 어떤 방법을 쓰는지(캘린더, 알람, 공유 일정 등)를 명시하면 더 구체적입니다.

Ejemplo: I need to remember appointments and commitments with friends and family. For example, I use a shared calendar for family events and set multiple phone reminders for important meetings and birthdays.

Sugerencia: 방법을 잘 설명했지만 문장을 더 자연스럽고 간결하게 다듬으세요. 중복을 피하고 구체적인 앱이나 습관(예: 알람 빈도, 체크리스트 사용)을 언급하면 신뢰도가 높아집니다.

Ejemplo: I use my phone to remember important tasks: I set alarms, keep a checklist in a notes app, and schedule events in my calendar so I get notifications ahead of time.

× When I was in middle school I forgot an important promises I had made to a friend we planned to meet after class, but I forgot and she got really upset with me so I apologized to her.

✓ When I was in middle school I forgot an important promise I had made to a friend. We had planned to meet after class, but I forgot and she got really upset with me, so I apologized to her.

'Promises' should be singular 'promise' because it refers to one specific promise; this is a singular-plural agreement issue. Also the original run-on sentence is split to improve clarity and tense consistency: 'we planned' changed to 'we had planned' to show the plan occurred before the forgetting. Suggestion: use singular when referring to one item and split long sentences into shorter clauses with correct past perfect for earlier actions.

× We had planned to meet after class, but I forgot and she got really upset with me so I apologized to her.

✓ We had planned to meet after class, but I forgot and she got really upset with me, so I apologized to her.

The original sentence lacked a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'so', causing a punctuation and clause boundary issue rather than verb form error. Ensure past perfect 'had planned' is used correctly for an action completed before another past action. Suggestion: add comma before 'so' to separate independent clauses and maintain clear sequence of past events.

× I always set reminders on my phone so I don't forget important things to do.

✓ I always set reminders on my phone so I don't forget the important things I need to do.

The phrase 'important things to do' is awkward; using a relative clause 'the important things I need to do' is clearer. This addresses gerund/infinitive clarity: 'to do' after a noun can be acceptable but here a clause improves accuracy. Suggestion: use relative clauses to clarify which actions are meant.

× Also I write down to the list and schedule on applications in my phone.

✓ Also, I write things down on lists and schedule them in apps on my phone.

Original sentence has incorrect prepositions and word order: 'write down to the list' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'write things down on lists' and 'schedule them in apps'. This is a sentence structure and preposition issue. Suggestion: use 'write down on' for lists and 'in apps' for scheduling; place commas after sentence starters like 'Also'.

× I always write important appointments and deadlines in the Notes app on my phone.

✓ I always write important appointments and deadlines in the Notes app on my phone.

This sentence is correct; 'in the Notes app on my phone' uses prepositions properly. No change needed.

× I can check them whenever I need to.

✓ I can check them whenever I need to.

This sentence is correct; present tense modal 'can' with base verb 'check' is appropriate for habitual ability. No change needed.

× No, I'm not very good at memorizing things, so I always write important appointments and deadlines in the Notes app on my phone.

✓ No, I'm not very good at memorizing things, so I always write important appointments and deadlines in the Notes app on my phone.

Sentence is grammatically correct. Present progressive 'I'm not' and present habit 'I always write' are appropriate. No change needed.

× I have to remember promises and appointments I have made with friends and family.

✓ I have to remember promises and appointments I have made with friends and family.

Sentence is correct: present obligation 'have to' with present perfect 'have made' for past arrangements is appropriate. No change needed.

× Also I write down to the list and schedule on applications in my phone.

✓ Also, I write things down on lists and schedule them in apps on my phone.

Duplicate entry to reinforce correction: fix gerund/verb patterns and prepositions as above. 'Write down' should be followed by 'on lists', and 'schedule in apps' is correct. Suggestion: practice common collocations 'write down on' and 'schedule in'.