Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Clarify your main idea and reduce hesitations and irrelevant phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., Yes, I enjoy singing) then give one or two specific reasons with a simple example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' correctly and avoid personal references that don't fit (e.g., 'seeing him'). Keep it under 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress. For example, after a long day at work I usually sing along to my favorite songs for twenty minutes, which makes me feel relaxed and happier.

Sugerencia: Give a direct, grammatical response and provide a brief supporting detail. Say whether you have learned formal singing and then explain how you practice casually. Avoid long hesitations and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'but' or 'so' to connect ideas and keep under 3 sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't had formal training; I sing only for fun in my free time. I practise by listening to songs and singing along, but I don't take lessons or perform professionally.

Sugerencia: Be specific and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (I would like to sing for my family and close friends), then give one clear reason and one brief example. Avoid unclear phrases like 'three hour points' and finish sentences fully. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because their support makes performing less intimidating. For example, when I sing at small family gatherings I feel more confident and can enjoy the moment.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear reason with a specific example. Use correct verb forms and smoother linking phrases such as 'because' and 'for example'. Avoid filler words and keep it to 2–3 sentences, focusing on how singing affects emotions and wellbeing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it lets people express their emotions and connect with others. For example, singing with friends at a party often lifts everyone's mood and creates positive memories.

× Yes I do, I really like seeing him.

✓ Yes I do, I really like singing.

The student likely intended to say 'singing' not 'seeing'. This is a word choice/content error but affects tense and meaning; replace the incorrect verb with the correct gerund 'singing' to match 'I like'. Suggestion: use the gerund after 'like' for activities (I like singing).

× This is because, uh, singing can release my stress and for example, after a long time uh, visiting, I will spend time on singing with my favorite songs.

✓ This is because singing can relieve my stress; for example, after being away for a long time I will spend time singing my favorite songs.

Multiple issues: choice of verb 'release' is acceptable but 'relieve' is more natural with 'stress'; 'after a long time visiting' is ungrammatical - use 'after being away for a long time' or 'after a long visit'. Use the gerund 'singing' without the preposition 'on'. Combine into clearer clauses and remove filler words. Suggestion: simplify and use natural collocations: 'relieve stress', 'after being away', 'spend time singing'.

× No I sing it just for fun not so umm be proficient at the singing I just do at my free time so I don't need to be late about that to my show.

✓ No, I sing just for fun; I'm not proficient at singing. I just do it in my free time, so I don't need to prepare for shows.

Tense and verb form problems: 'sing it' is unnatural—use 'sing'; 'be proficient' should be 'I'm not proficient' (present continuous or present simple for ability); 'I just do at my free time' should be 'I just do it in my free time' (preposition and pronoun). 'Don't need to be late about that to my show' is unclear; likely means 'don't need to prepare for shows'. Suggestion: use contractions and correct prepositions ('in my free time') and clear phrasing for preparation ('prepare for shows').

× I just singing how I knew that's all for me I just.

✓ I just sing how I know; that's all for me.

Incorrect verb forms: 'I just singing' is missing auxiliary—should be 'I just sing'. 'How I knew' mixes past tense 'knew' with present; use present 'know' to match habitual action. Suggestion: use base verb for habitual present actions after 'just' (I just sing) and maintain consistent tense.

× I would like to sing for my close friend and family because their support make a performing less intimidating and more enjoyable.

✓ I would like to sing for my close friends and family because their support makes performing less intimidating and more enjoyable.

Subject-verb agreement and pluralization: 'close friend and family' should be 'close friends and family' if both groups intended. 'Their support make' needs 'makes' to agree with singular collective noun 'support'. 'A performing' is incorrect; use 'performing' (gerund) without article. Suggestion: ensure noun plurality matches context and use correct verb agreement ('support makes').

× Singing for them allows me to put my confidence and three hour points through.

✓ Singing for them allows me to build my confidence and get feedback.

Unclear phrasing 'put my confidence and three hour points through' is ungrammatical and likely a vocabulary error. Replace with clear, natural expressions: 'build my confidence' and 'get feedback' (or 'improve my skills'). Suggestion: use common collocations and avoid literal translations; express intended ideas simply.

× Share this experience and they are.

✓ I want to share this experience with them.

Fragment and word order: 'Share this experience and they are' is incomplete and ungrammatical. Make a full sentence with subject and correct preposition: 'I want to share this experience with them.' Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a clear subject and verb and use 'share ... with ...'.

× From my point of view, yes, uh, singing can find happiness would be good.

✓ From my point of view, yes, singing can bring happiness.

Redundant and conflicting verbs 'can find happiness would be good' mix modalities and tenses. Use a single modal 'can' with base verb 'bring' to express ability. Suggestion: choose one modal construction and a natural verb collocation ('bring happiness').

× This is because when we singing, we express our feelings to and to our audience That's made, uh, our healthiest can be have.

✓ This is because when we sing, we express our feelings to our audience. That makes us feel healthier.

Use base verb after 'when' for present habitual actions: 'when we sing' not 'when we singing'. Remove duplicate 'to' and fix clause: 'That makes us feel healthier' is natural. Original 'our healthiest can be have' is ungrammatical; replace with 'feel healthier'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms after time conjunctions and simple sentence structure: subject + verb + object.