List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatical, concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct verb forms (e.g., 'I make a list', 'it helps me save money') and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me save money. For example, when I plan my shopping I stick to essentials like groceries and avoid impulse buys, which reduces waste and keeps my budget in check.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and one specific supporting detail with correct grammar and linking words. Use simple past/present correctly and avoid extra fillers. Mention an example of how lists improve productivity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make lists for work because they help me organise my day. For instance, I list tasks by priority each morning, so I finish urgent projects first and avoid wasting time on less important activities.

Sugerencia: Clarify your idea with a single coherent reason and one specific explanation. Use correct grammar and linking words ('because', 'so', 'for example'). Avoid repeating words and ensure subject-verb agreement.

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive. For example, if someone expects to stick to a strict plan but often gets interrupted, they may feel frustrated and stop using lists altogether.

Sugerencia: Give a direct preference followed by one concrete reason with correct grammar and fewer hesitations. Use linking words ('because', 'so') and avoid vague phrases. Provide a specific example of how writing by hand helps memory.

Ejemplo: I prefer writing lists on paper because handwriting helps me remember tasks better. For example, when I jot down a to-do list in a notebook, I often visualise the items and tick them off, which improves my recall and motivation.

× Yeah, usually I make list when I shop because it's helps me to keep a lot of money, because when I don't make list, I spend a lot and buy some unnecessary things.

✓ Yeah, usually I make a list when I shop because it helps me save a lot of money; when I don't make a list, I spend a lot and buy unnecessary things.

Errors: missing articles before 'list' and unnecessary 'it's'. Use 'a list' (singular countable) and drop 'it's' before 'helps'; use simple present 'helps' for habitual action and 'save' instead of 'to keep a lot of money'. Also remove 'some' before 'unnecessary things' for conciseness. Suggestion: always include 'a' with singular countable nouns and use clear subject-verb structure for present habits.

× Yes I also make at least for my work at helps me to make a good schedule and don't waste time and to do everything on the time too. So yes it helps me a lot and I make usually list on my work.

✓ Yes, I also make at least one for my work; it helps me make a good schedule, avoid wasting time, and do everything on time. So yes, it helps me a lot and I usually make a list for work.

Errors: missing article before 'one' and 'list' ('at least one', 'a list') and awkward phrasing 'on the time'. Use 'avoid wasting time' and 'on time' (correct preposition). Also reorder adverb 'usually' to natural position. Suggestion: insert appropriate articles and place adverbs before main verbs.

× Maybe because it's made them feel, it's make them feel that they're make some plans and made them uncomfortable on that.

✓ Maybe because it makes them feel like they have to make plans, and that makes them uncomfortable.

Errors: incorrect verb forms and structure ('it's made them feel', 'it's make them feel', 'they're make'); tense and subject-verb agreement issues. Use simple present 'makes' for habitual reason and correct clause 'feel like they have to make plans'. Suggestion: use consistent simple present and avoid unnecessary contractions that change meaning.

× Some people can follow the plan and plan plan always destroyed.

✓ Some people can follow a plan, but the plan is often ruined.

Errors: repetition 'plan plan', wrong tense/voice 'always destroyed'. Use passive 'is ruined' or active 'gets ruined' in simple present to describe habitual outcome. Suggestion: avoid word repetition and use correct present passive or active form.

× So maybe the main reason why they don't make a plan they are can't follow it.

✓ So maybe the main reason they don't make a plan is that they can't follow it.

Errors: incorrect word order 'they are can't' and redundant 'why'. Correct structure: 'the reason is that...' and modal 'can't' after subject. Suggestion: use 'is that' to introduce explanation and place 'can't' correctly after subject.

× Uh, usually I do that in paper because when I, uh, writing by my hand, I have a more chance for memorize it because when it's on my phone, sometimes it's not, uh, make me feel that I really do that because it's like sadly automatically.

✓ Uh, usually I do that on paper because when I write by hand, I am more likely to remember it; when it's on my phone, sometimes it doesn't make me feel like I really did it because it feels too automatic.

Errors: wrong preposition 'in paper' (use 'on paper'), incorrect verb forms ('writing by my hand' -> 'write by hand'), awkward expressions 'have a more chance for memorize' -> 'am more likely to remember'. Also 'doesn't make me feel' and 'feels too automatic' correct meaning. Suggestion: use 'on paper', simple present for habits, and natural collocations like 'write by hand' and 'likely to remember'.

× So yes, I prefer to make it in paper because it's make me.

✓ So yes, I prefer to make it on paper because it helps me.

Errors: preposition 'in paper' should be 'on paper' and verb form 'it's make me' incorrect—use 'it helps me'. Suggestion: use correct preposition and simple present 'helps' for habitual effect.