Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words ("you know") and correct basic grammar (e.g., "addicted to the hobby", "three pairs a year"). Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy about three pairs a year: one for sports, one for everyday fashion, and one as a collector's item. For example, I often wear Air Force Ones when I go out because they are comfortable and stylish.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use clear chronological or causal linking (e.g., "because", "so"). Reduce hesitations and fix grammar ("they don't sell them in Vietnam", "I buy from US sellers"). Mention one specific experience or app to make the answer concrete.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. Because some models are not available in Vietnam, I buy them online from US sellers and have them shipped here. For instance, I often use the Nike app to order limited edition sneakers.

Sugerencia: Give a clear currency and range, then add one specific example with concise explanation. Correct grammar and sequencing ("I usually spend $100–$150, but once I paid $250 for a collector's item"). Use linking words like "however" or "for example" to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I usually spend about $100–$150 per pair. However, once I paid $250 for a special collector's Nike shoe that was a collaboration with Pokémon.

Sugerencia: State your preference in one sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Avoid unclear phrases and fix grammar ("I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable"). Be specific about features (e.g., cushioning, support, style) and contexts (working out, travel).

Ejemplo: I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable because I want to look good and feel supported when I work out or travel. For example, I choose shoes with good cushioning and a stylish design so they suit the gym and casual outings.

× Well, you know, I'm really addicted in that hobby.

✓ Well, you know, I'm really addicted to that hobby.

Use 'addicted to' not 'addicted in'. The correct preposition after 'addicted' is 'to'. Replace 'in' with 'to' to form the correct collocation.

× I have to buy, you know, 3 new shoes a year just for, you know, my sports.

✓ I have to buy, you know, three new pairs of shoes a year just for, you know, my sports.

Use plural forms correctly: 'shoes' with a numeral often pairs with 'pairs of shoes'. Use 'pairs' and write numbers in words in formal speech optionally. 'Three new pairs of shoes' is correct.

× Also fashion and one is for collector for collecting.

✓ Also for fashion, and one is for collecting as a collector.

Sentence needs correct prepositions and word order. Use 'for fashion' and 'for collecting' or 'as a collector'. Reorder to make purpose clear.

× I really like to wear the Air Force One to go out.

✓ I really like to wear Air Force Ones to go out.

When referring to a model name generally, use plural 'Air Force Ones' or no article; do not use 'the' before a general brand model. Also match number with context (wearing them generally -> plural).

× Well, definitely, yes, you know, some type of shoes like a brand new, it didn't come to Vietnam, So I have to buy online from, you know, a pro the from America and it's gonna shift to Vietnam for me.

✓ Well, definitely. Some types of shoes, like brand-new releases that didn't come to Vietnam, I have to buy online from a seller in America and have them shipped to Vietnam for me.

Multiple errors: 'some type of shoes' should be 'some types of shoes' or 'some types of shoes' or 'some types', 'a brand new' is incorrect as a noun phrase, and 'pro the from America' is unintelligible; use 'a seller in America'. Use 'shipped' not 'shift'. Maintain correct article and verb choice.

× Uh, I'm taking on the the apps of Nike.

✓ Uh, I'm using the Nike app.

Use 'using' for apps: 'using the Nike app' is natural. 'Taking on the the apps of Nike' is incorrect preposition and article usage.

× Well, around 100 to 150 and I got one special once.

✓ Well, around $100 to $150, and I bought one special pair once.

Include currency symbol and units; 'got' is informal and ambiguous—use 'bought'. Add 'pair' because shoes are counted as pairs.

× It cost two $250.

✓ It cost $250.

Incorrect placement of 'two' before a currency amount is wrong. Use '$250' or 'two hundred fifty dollars'.

× This is a one of the collector of Nike.

✓ This is one of Nike's collector items.

Use possessive form 'Nike's' and 'one of' followed by plural noun 'collector items' or 'one of the collector's items'. The original article usage and noun form are incorrect.

× It's collab with the anime Pokémon really.

✓ It's a collaboration with the anime Pokémon, really.

Use 'a collaboration with' rather than 'collab with'. Add article 'a' and correct word order for natural English.

× Well I really love the buff you know if I wanted to buy new shoes for myself, I really looking for the shoes that can't have me do about it.

✓ Well, I really love the bulk. You know, if I want to buy new shoes for myself, I really look for shoes that I can rely on.

Sentence has several issues: 'buff' unclear—likely 'bulk' or 'style'; verb forms must match conditional: 'if I want' (present) with habitual 'I look for'. 'can't have me do about it' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I can rely on' or 'that suit me'. Correct pronoun and verb forms.

× They also have a height of fashion and also make me feel comfort when I working out and you know it can get ready to go on a trip.

✓ They are also fashionable and make me feel comfortable when I'm working out, and they are easy to get ready with for a trip.

Use correct adjective/adverb forms: 'fashionable' (adjective) and 'comfortable' (adjective), and verb forms: 'I'm working out' (present continuous). Replace awkward phrases with natural expressions like 'easy to pack' or 'easy to get ready with'.