Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clear and concise: start with a direct topic sentence (yes/no + frequency), then give one or two specific reasons. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar for possession and agreement (e.g., “shoes affect our look”), and name brands clearly. Keep answers under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do buy shoes fairly often, about once every two or three months. I enjoy updating my style because shoes can really change how an outfit looks. For example, I recently bought a pair of Adidas trainers that I wear for casual outings.

Sugerencia: Open with a direct answer, then give a clear, specific reason using linking words (because, so). Correct grammar for negatives and conditionals: “I haven’t” and “if they are too big.” Give an alternative solution (e.g., buying in-store to try them on).

Ejemplo: No, I haven't bought shoes online because comfort matters a lot to me and I prefer trying them on first. If shoes are even slightly too large, they feel uncomfortable and it's a waste of money, so I usually shop in physical stores to test the fit.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear amount and currency, and give a brief explanation for any exceptions. Use past tense correctly and be specific about reasons and outcomes. Keep it concise and avoid trailing off.

Ejemplo: I usually spend about 3,000 to 6,000 baht on a pair of shoes. However, last time I bought a much more expensive pair as a reward for doing well at university; I wanted something high quality to celebrate my achievement.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear reason with one supporting example. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., “practical” instead of “morals”, and “daily” instead of “day-to-day” used awkwardly). Avoid repetition of words like “definitely.”

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because they are more practical for everyday use. For instance, I wear cushioned sneakers to commute and walk long distances, which keeps my feet pain-free all day.

× Yes, I'd like to buy shoes because the the shoes is held over our look what I the fashion is quite more interesting.

✓ Yes, I'd like to buy shoes because shoes are important to our look and fashion is quite interesting.

The sentence has article repetition ('the the') and incorrect article usage ('the shoes is'). Remove unnecessary 'the' and use plural noun 'shoes' with plural verb 'are'. Reorder phrase for clarity: 'shoes are important to our look'. Use 'fashion is quite interesting' instead of 'the fashion is quite more interesting'. Suggestion: Simplify ideas into clear clauses and ensure articles match count (no article for general plural nouns).

× I have one that quite I really like.

✓ I have one that I really like.

The original has redundant adverbs and awkward word order. Remove 'quite' before 'I' and place 'really' before 'like' for natural word order: 'I really like'. Ensure subject and verb are correctly positioned. Suggestion: Keep adverbs adjacent to the verb they modify and avoid duplicate modifiers.

× Is there Adidas lead shoes?

✓ Are there Adidas shoes?

The question word order and adjective use are incorrect. Use plural verb 'are' with plural noun 'shoes'. Remove unclear word 'lead'. If you meant a specific model, use 'Are there Adidas ... shoes?' or 'Are these Adidas shoes?'. Suggestion: For yes/no questions, invert subject and auxiliary verb: 'Are there...?'.

× So it's quite really.

✓ So they're really nice.

The phrase 'quite really' is redundant and ungrammatical. Replace with a single adverb 'really' and a meaningful adjective 'nice' or 'comfortable'. Ensure pronoun matches noun (they for shoes). Suggestion: Avoid stacking similar adverbs; choose one that conveys the intended emphasis.

× No, I havent because I quite serious about this comfortable about shoes.

✓ No, I haven't because I'm quite serious about comfort in shoes.

Missing apostrophe in 'haven't' and incorrect verb form 'I quite serious' needs a linking verb 'am'. 'Comfortable about shoes' is incorrect; use noun 'comfort' and preposition 'in'. Suggestion: Use contractions correctly ('haven't') and include 'be' verbs when describing states: 'I am serious'. Use appropriate noun forms.

× If it's quite larger than my foot I will not like to wearing and I will feel like it is worse for the money, so I prefer.

✓ If they are much larger than my feet, I will not want to wear them and I will feel like it is a waste of money, so I don't prefer them.

Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to shoes and plural 'feet'. 'Quite larger' is unidiomatic; use 'much larger' or 'too large'. 'Like to wearing' is incorrect: after 'want' use the infinitive 'to wear'. 'Worse for the money' is unclear; use 'a waste of money'. Suggestion: Keep pronouns consistent, use correct comparative forms and the infinitive after 'want'.

× I usually spend around 3000 to 6000, but last time that I buying shoes it's quite really expensive, but that's one is like my reward that I can leash my score high in my university, so I.

✓ I usually spend around 3,000 to 6,000, but last time I bought shoes they were quite expensive. That pair was like a reward for getting high scores at my university.

Mix of present and past tenses is confusing. Use past tense 'bought' and 'were' for a past event. Remove incomplete fragment 'so I.' Use 'pair' for a specific shoes and 'reward for getting high scores' instead of 'leash my score high'. Numbers should have commas. Ensure sentence completeness. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and complete sentences; use correct collocations ('bought shoes', 'reward for').

× Definitely comfortable shoes because if the fashionable is quite morals cannot use for the real term.

✓ Definitely comfortable shoes because fashionable ones are often not practical for everyday use.

Original contains nonsense phrase 'the fashionable is quite morals' and 'cannot use for the real term'. Replace with clear comparison: 'fashionable ones are often not practical for everyday use.' Use plural 'ones' to refer to shoes. Suggestion: Express contrast clearly: 'fashionable shoes' vs 'practical/comfortable shoes' and use standard phrases like 'everyday use'.

× I would definitely prefer comfortable shoes for juice like day-to-day.

✓ I would definitely prefer comfortable shoes for use day-to-day.

'juice like' is incorrect and likely a mishearing of 'use'. Replace with 'for use day-to-day' or 'for day-to-day use'. Ensure pronoun or noun choice matches meaning. Suggestion: Use the common collocation 'day-to-day use' to describe everyday wear.