Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và mạch lạc hơn, sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp; bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể bằng cách dùng liên từ để nối ý. Ví dụ: nêu rõ sở thích chính, tần suất, lý do và một ví dụ ngắn. Chú ý thì động từ và số nhiều/số ít, và phát âm từ như "listening to music" hay "watching movies".

Ejemplo: My main hobby is watching movies. I watch films almost every day because it's a great way to relax after work. In particular, I enjoy psychological thrillers for their unexpected twists. For example, last weekend I watched a suspenseful film that kept me thinking for days.

Sugerencia: Cần rõ ràng về thời gian (quá khứ) và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp; tránh lặp và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "I enjoyed" not "I enjoy" khi nói về quá khứ). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động và một ví dụ ngắn để làm rõ cảm xúc và lý do.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child I enjoyed playing games with my friends, especially hide-and-seek, because it was fun and energetic. I also liked family trips to new places, which were exciting since I could discover different cultures and foods. For instance, a trip to the countryside once let me try local dishes I'd never tasted before.

Sugerencia: Cần ngắn gọn, mạch lạc và đúng ngữ pháp khi nói về sở thích kéo dài từ bé đến nay. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích tần suất và loại phim yêu thích, kèm ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh lỗi lặp từ và cấu trúc câu rời rạc.

Ejemplo: I've enjoyed watching movies since I was a child. I often spend whole afternoons watching dramas and family films because I love the stories and characters. For example, I used to rewatch the same animated movie every weekend with my siblings.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời rõ ràng rằng có hay không, rồi giải thích mức độ giống nhau và đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể; sửa ngữ pháp (thì, cấu trúc) và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý. Nên nêu tần suất và một kỷ niệm ngắn để minh họa.

Ejemplo: Yes, we share some hobbies, especially traveling. My family and I love visiting new countries and usually spend a week traveling together each summer. For example, last summer we explored a coastal town for seven days and enjoyed local food and beaches together.

× I like listening music, listen to music, watching the movie we are traveling.

✓ I like listening to music, listening to music, and watching movies when we are traveling.

'Listening' requires the preposition to: 'listening to music'. Parallel verbs should use consistent forms: 'listening to music' and 'watching movies'. Also use plural 'movies' for general activities and add 'when' for the time clause.'

× But if I wants to choose or if I have to choose one, I will choose watching movies.

✓ But if I want to choose, or if I have to choose one, I will choose watching movies.

Subject 'I' takes the base verb 'want', not 'wants'. Use 'want' for first person singular. Also maintain parallel structure.'

× I watching movie on a daily basis and it's heavy comfort.

✓ I watch movies on a daily basis and they are very comforting.

Missing auxiliary 'am' or correct verb form: use simple present 'watch' for habitual actions. 'Movie' should be plural when speaking generally. 'It's heavy comfort' is unnatural; use 'they are very comforting' or 'it is very comforting'.

× Just when I was a child, I had several hobbies.

✓ When I was a child, I had several hobbies.

'Just when' is unnecessary and awkward; simple 'When I was a child' is more natural. Past tense 'had' is correct.'

× I loved hanging out with my friends and playing games like hide, hide and seek.

✓ I loved hanging out with my friends and playing games like hide-and-seek.

Use the correct compound noun 'hide-and-seek'. Hyphens connect words in the game name; avoid unnecessary repetition 'hide, hide'.

× And I also enjoy traveling with my family to new place because it was exciting to explore different science.

✓ I also enjoyed traveling with my family to new places because it was exciting to explore different scenes.

Mix of present 'enjoy' and past 'was' requires past 'enjoyed' to match childhood context. 'New place' should be plural 'new places' for general meaning. 'Different science' is incorrect word choice; likely 'different scenes' or 'scenery'.

× I think is watching my favorite movie.

✓ I think it is watching my favorite movies.

Missing subject 'it' after 'I think'. Use plural 'movies' for general hobby. Or better: 'I think it is watching my favorite movies.'

× This is my childhood hobbies is I would say I can spend all day I I for watching my favorite movie

✓ This was my childhood hobby; I would say I could spend all day watching my favorite movies.

Mismatch: 'This is my childhood hobbies is' is incorrect. Use singular 'hobby' with 'was' for past. 'I can spend' should be past 'I could spend' to match childhood. Remove repeated 'I' and unnecessary 'for'. Use gerund 'watching'.

× They like a drama or movie.

✓ I like dramas or movies.

Pronoun 'They' doesn't refer clearly; use 'I' to state preference. Use plural 'dramas or movies' for general preference.'

× Yes, definitely please. My family and I have.

✓ Yes, definitely. My family and I do.

'Please' is unnecessary here. The fragment 'My family and I have.' needs completion; use 'do' to answer question about having the same hobbies.'

× I really enjoy while traveling to the new new place, especially a new country.

✓ I really enjoy traveling to new places, especially new countries.

Do not use 'while' after 'enjoy'; simply 'enjoy traveling'. Remove duplicate 'new'. Use plural 'places' and 'countries' for general statements.'

× And I also remember that on the summer we always spend one week to traveling.

✓ And I also remember that in the summer we always spent one week traveling.

Use preposition 'in' with seasons: 'in the summer'. For past memories use past tense 'spent' not 'spend'. Do not use 'to traveling'; use gerund 'traveling' after 'spend time' or simply 'spent one week traveling'.'