Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more organized: start with a clear topic sentence, use commas and short sentences, include linking words and specific details. Avoid repetition and correct tense/grammar (e.g., “in my free time”).

Ejemplo: I have several hobbies. In my free time I enjoy watching TV and reading books, and I also like baking, especially chocolate cakes. For example, my favorite film is Marcus, and my favorite book is Strangers of Life. I usually bake on weekends because it helps me relax and I often share my cakes with friends.

Sugerencia: Give a direct past-tense topic sentence, avoid vague endings, and add specific details using linking words. Correct verb forms and finish your thought.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child I loved riding my bicycle and playing with dolls and toy cars. For example, I used to ride to the park every afternoon and then play imaginative games with my dolls and cars, which helped me be creative.

Sugerencia: Answer clearly with a topic sentence in present perfect or simple present, use linking words to connect past and present, correct age phrasing, and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have enjoyed watching TV since I was a child. I used to watch cartoons and now, at 18, I often watch films and series because I find them entertaining and a good way to learn English. For instance, I watch a documentary every week to learn about history.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer, use correct grammar for family descriptions and ages, provide specific examples of shared hobbies and use linking words to show continuity.

Ejemplo: Yes, we share some hobbies. For example, my two brothers and a 16-year-old sister and I enjoy playing football and watching movies together. We have done these activities since childhood, so we still spend weekends playing football or watching films as a family.

× Yes I do I really enjoy passing my time watching TV making some cakes and reading some books my favorite film it's Marcus and my favorite book is strangers of life and I really like to make chocolate cakes so on my free times that that's why what I do.

✓ Yes, I do. I really enjoy spending my time watching TV, making cakes, and reading books. My favorite film is Marcus and my favorite book is Strangers of Life. I also really like to make chocolate cakes, so that is what I do in my free time.

The original contains run-on sentences, missing punctuation, incorrect verb choice 'passing my time' instead of 'spending my time', unnecessary articles and pluralization issues ('some cakes', 'some books'), and awkward phrasing ('that's why what I do'). Break long run-ons into separate sentences, use correct collocations (spend time), use consistent pluralization, and use 'in my free time' as the idiomatic expression. Use commas to separate items in a list and periods to end independent clauses.

× Yes, I really do, and it's a pleasure to talk about it. When I was a child, I used to walk with my bicycle and I use it to play with my dolls and sometimes with cars. And I had a really, really.

✓ Yes, I do, and it's a pleasure to talk about it. When I was a child, I used to ride my bicycle and I used it to play with my dolls and sometimes with toy cars. I had a really great time.

Mixing present tense 'do' with past activities is acceptable here but internal verb forms were inconsistent: 'walk with my bicycle' should be 'ride my bicycle'; 'I use it' should be past 'I used it'; 'cars' better described as 'toy cars'; the final fragment 'I had a really, really.' is incomplete—complete it as 'I had a really great time.' Ensure past tense consistency for childhood activities and complete the sentence.

× Yes I do when I was a child I really used to watch TV I really enjoyed it and now I have it 18 years old and I also like it and I also like to watch movies and it's something that I do I do very often since I was child that's the hobby that I really enjoy.

✓ Yes, I do. When I was a child I used to watch TV and I really enjoyed it. Now I am 18 years old and I still enjoy it. I also like to watch movies; it is something I have done very often since I was a child. That's the hobby I really enjoy.

The original is a long run-on with tense and age expression errors: 'now I have it 18 years old' should be 'now I am 18 years old.' Replace repeated phrases ('I also like it and I also like to watch') with concise statements. Use present perfect or present simple appropriately: 'I have done very often since I was a child' indicates continuing habit. Break into sentences to improve clarity.

× Yes I do, for example I have two brothers, my sister which have 16 years old. So since I was a child we were like best friends and from there up to now we continue having the same hobbies because we likes the same.

✓ Yes, I do. For example, I have two brothers and a sister who is 16 years old. Since we were children we were like best friends, and up to now we continue to have the same hobbies because we like the same things.

Several pronoun and relative clause errors: use 'a sister who is 16 years old' instead of 'my sister which have 16 years old.' 'Which' is incorrect for people and verb 'have' should be 'is.' 'Since I was a child we were like best friends' should use plural 'children' or rephrase; use consistent verb forms: 'we continue to have' and correct subject-verb agreement 'we like' not 'we likes.' Also add 'things' after 'the same' to complete the idea.