Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Говорите в настоящем и прошедшем времени правильно, сократите неоднозначности и паузы; используйте чёткую структуру: короткое вступление и одно-два конкретных примера. Избегайте лишних слов-паразитов и исправляйте грамматику (например, "I needed to study" вместо "I need to studying").

Ejemplo: I had many hobbies such as dancing, drawing and reading, but I stopped them last year because I needed to study for important exams. For example, I used to dance twice a week and read novels on weekends, but now I focus on my revision until the exams are over.

Sugerencia: Будьте конкретнее и используйте правильные названия занятий; стройте предложение: тема + детали. Избегайте неопределённых слов и описаний через паузы; лучше сказать "make bracelets" и объяснить, как вы это делали.

Ejemplo: Yes. When I was a child I used to make friendship bracelets and play with homemade slime. I remember making bracelets from colored threads with my friends, and we mixed glue and borax to create stretchy slime that we shaped and poked for fun.

Sugerencia: Дайте более прямой и развернутый ответ: начните с краткого "No" или "Yes", затем объясните причину с конкретными примерами того, как изменились ваши интересы. Это покажет связность и предоставит содержание для обсуждения.

Ejemplo: No, I don't have a hobby I have kept since childhood. My interests have changed — for example, I loved collecting stickers as a child, but now I prefer studying languages and reading articles, which reflect my current goals.

Sugerencia: Используйте более естественную фразу и грамматику: "No, we don't share hobbies"; структурируйте ответ: короткий вывод + конкретные различия. Уточните слова и согласование (mother and father -> my parents), избегайте повторов.

Ejemplo: No, we don't have the same hobbies. For instance, I study English and my sister is learning Turkish, while my parents work full-time and prefer relaxing at home, so our daily routines and interests are quite different.

× I had a lot of hobbies, I used to dance, draw, read, but last year I need to studying and uh get ready for my exams.

✓ I had a lot of hobbies; I used to dance, draw, and read, but last year I needed to study and get ready for my exams.

The verb phrase 'need to studying' mixes present-tense modal-like 'need' with a gerund 'studying' incorrectly; the past time marker 'last year' requires past tense 'needed' and the bare infinitive 'to study'. Use past tense 'needed' and infinitive 'to study' for correct structure. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense when referring to past events: 'needed to study'. Use parallel structure in lists: 'dance, draw, and read'.

× Because of this I don't dance, read to the and uh draw anymore.

✓ Because of this I don't dance, read, or draw anymore.

The sentence uses present simple to describe a present state, which is correct, but has incorrect coordinator 'to the' and missing 'or' between items. Remove extraneous words and use 'or' to join alternatives. Suggestion: Use 'or' for lists of activities when stating what you no longer do: 'I don't dance, read, or draw anymore.'

× I used to do another bracelet and uh, I did the slimes.

✓ I used to make bracelets and play with slime.

'Do another bracelet' is unnatural and mixes verb choice and count; 'used to' requires base verb 'make'. 'I did the slimes' uses past simple incorrectly for habitual childhood activity and wrong noun form; use 'play with slime' or 'play with slimes' depending on meaning. Suggestion: Use 'used to' + base verb for past habits and choose correct collocations: 'make bracelets' and 'play with slime'.

× It's uh, liquid.

✓ It was liquid.

Context refers to a past experience ('I used to...'), so the state should be in past tense: 'was' rather than 'is'. Also, 'liquid' as description is fine but better to integrate: 'It was a liquid substance.' Suggestion: Match tense of descriptive verbs to the time frame being described.

× What we can, umm, with we can play.

✓ We could play with it.

The original sentence has poor word order and redundant phrases. Use a simple subject-verb-object order and an appropriate modal for ability or possibility in past context: 'could' or 'were able to'. Suggestion: Say 'We could play with it' or 'We were able to play with it.'

× I think no, because my hobbies, my views about this life changed since my childhood.

✓ I don't think so, because my hobbies and my views about life have changed since my childhood.

'I think no' is unnatural; use 'I don't think so'. 'Changed since my childhood' mixes simple past with 'since' which requires present perfect 'have changed' to show change from past until now. Also 'about this life' is unnatural; use 'about life'. Suggestion: Use present perfect with 'since' and natural collocations: 'have changed since my childhood.'

× Absolutely no, Despite that we're family we don't have a similar hobbies or daily routines.

✓ Absolutely not. Despite being a family, we don't have similar hobbies or daily routines.

'Absolutely no' is wrong; use 'absolutely not'. 'Despite that we're family' is awkward; use 'Despite being a family' or 'Despite being family'. 'a similar hobbies' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'similar hobbies' without 'a'. Suggestion: Correct negation 'absolutely not', use 'despite being family', and ensure article agreement with plural nouns.

× For example I'm studying English and my sister studying Turkish, she had English language and my mother and the father they are working and because of this they don't have a hobbies like mine.

✓ For example, I'm studying English and my sister is studying Turkish; she learned English before. My mother and father work, and because of this they don't have hobbies like mine.

Multiple problems: missing auxiliary 'is' after 'my sister' (present progressive), 'she had English language' is unclear and mismatches tense—use 'she learned English before' or 'she studied English', 'the father' is unnecessary article for 'father', and 'don't have a hobbies' mixes plural noun with singular article—use 'don't have hobbies'. Also 'are working' can be simplified to 'work' to describe occupations. Suggestion: Use proper auxiliaries for continuous tense ('is studying'), correct past tense for completed actions ('learned/studied'), omit unnecessary definite articles with family nouns, and match articles with plural nouns ('hobbies').