Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g. "eye drop to my daughter"). Use correct tense and simple connector words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk every morning. I usually walk to my daughter's school to drop her off and then walk back home, which helps me wake up and get some exercise.

Sugerencia: Answer the past-question directly and speak about your own childhood rather than current routines. Use past tense and give one or two specific memories. Avoid repeating words and finish your sentence clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often walked outside as a child. I remember walking to the local market with my family after school to buy food and household items.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, and, also). Use plural/singular correctly and avoid filler words.

Ejemplo: I think people like walking in parks because it helps them relax and get fresh air. Also, parks offer pleasant scenery and a chance to meet friends or exercise.

Sugerencia: Answer the hypothetical clearly: state one place, then give a specific reason or detail. Keep sentences short and avoid repeating phrases.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in a large city park. I enjoy long walks there because the paths are peaceful and there are nice views and cafes to rest at.

Sugerencia: Use past tense to describe a recent event, and give a clear sequence of actions. Avoid broken fragments and repetitions; use linking words like 'after' or 'then'.

Ejemplo: Recently I walked to my daughter's school to pick her up. After that we walked home together and then I went to work.

× Yes, yes, actually every morning we are.

✓ Yes, actually we walk every morning.

The original sentence uses 'we are' incorrectly to express a habitual action. Use the simple present tense 'we walk' for routines; also remove redundant 'yes'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I have better walking.

✓ I enjoy walking a lot.

'I have better walking' is ungrammatical. Use a verb or expression that correctly conveys liking an activity: 'I enjoy walking' or 'I like walking a lot.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× I love walking, especially after after my eye drop to my daughter in the school and then walking in into our house.

✓ I love walking, especially after dropping my daughter off at school and then walking home.

Repeated 'after' and incorrect phrase 'my eye drop to my daughter' should be 'dropping my daughter off'. Use 'at school' not 'in the school' for general location. 'Walking in into our house' should be 'walking home' or 'walking to our house.' Grammar problem type ID:11

× And it's not, it's not so part of my it's not.

✓ It is not a big part of my routine.

The original repeats fragments and lacks a clear structure. Rephrase to a complete thought: 'It is not a big part of my routine.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, because because my daughters go to school every morning and and after that we're going to to the supermarket to buy some something food, something needs for our house and then after.

✓ Yes, when I was a child we often went to the supermarket after my daughters went to school to buy food and household needs.

The question asks about the past. Use past tense 'went' and 'went to school'. Remove repeated words and use 'food and household needs' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I think, I think peoples like to going to work for the relax to, to need the fresh air and to enjoy the view and, uh, meeting friends.

✓ I think people like going to parks to relax, get fresh air, enjoy the view, and meet friends.

Use 'people' (not 'peoples') and 'like going' (gerund after 'like'). 'To work' is incorrect here; use 'to relax'. Use parallel structure for verb forms: 'to relax, get, enjoy, and meet.' Grammar problem type ID:12

× Umm I would like to go to the park and park from the supermarket and and go to the my house.

✓ I would like to go to a park near the supermarket and then walk to my house.

Fix article usage 'a park' and remove duplicated words. Use 'walk to my house' for clarity and natural phrasing; 'would like' is correct for hypothetical preference. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I like I like walking every mornings.

✓ I like walking every morning.

Use singular 'morning' in 'every morning' and remove repeated 'I like'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I going to work to walk a while ago in the school and.

✓ I went for a walk near the school a little while ago on my way to work.

The original mixes tenses and lacks auxiliary verbs. Use past simple 'I went' for 'a while ago' and clarify location 'near the school' and purpose 'on my way to work.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× And I dropped. I picked my my, my daughter and my going home.

✓ I picked up my daughter and went home.

Use the correct phrasal verb 'picked up' and past tense 'went'. Remove repeated words and incomplete fragments like 'I dropped.' Grammar problem type ID:12