Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct minor grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid sentence fragments and repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. In fact, I live on the 47th floor of one of the residential towers, so I can see much of the city from my windows.

Sugerencia: Use correct verb tenses and smoother linking words. Give one clear example with specific details and avoid awkward phrases.

Ejemplo: Sometimes. If a building’s design surprises me, I usually take a photo. For example, traditional Chinese architecture looks breathtaking at night when illuminated, so I often photograph those scenes.

Sugerencia: Make the answer more coherent and correct grammar. Start with a direct statement, then add two concise supporting details (when you learned about it and why you want to visit). Avoid repetition and fix factual phrasing.

Ejemplo: I would love to visit the Eiffel Tower. I first learned about it in middle school when I read that it was built for the 1889 World’s Fair, and since then it has remained a symbol of Paris and romance, which makes me want to see it in person.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and two specific, complete reasons with examples. Correct grammar (uncountable/plural, verb forms) and finish sentences fully.

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't prefer to live in a tall building. Although I currently do, I find it inconvenient because I often have to wait in long queues for the elevator, and maintenance or utility costs tend to be higher in high-rise apartments.

× My apartment is located on 47th floor.

✓ My apartment is located on the 47th floor.

Omitting the definite article 'the' before ordinal numbers and floor designations is incorrect in English. Use 'the 47th floor' to specify a particular floor. Suggestion: always include 'the' before ordinal floor numbers (the first floor, the 5th floor).

× And it's one of the residential areas in.

✓ And it's in one of the residential areas.

The original sentence has an incorrect word order and an unnecessary preposition at the end. Place the prepositional phrase 'in one of the residential areas' after 'it's' to form a coherent sentence. Suggestion: ensure phrases are ordered logically: subject + verb + complement.

× It depends, if I was very surprised or shocked by the building design then I definitely will take a picture of it.

✓ It depends; if I am very surprised or shocked by the building's design, then I will definitely take a picture of it.

Mixed and incorrect verb tenses: 'It depends' is present, so the conditional clause should use present simple or present subjunctive for a real conditional (if I am...). Also 'will' should be in the main clause after the condition. Use present 'am' and 'will' for a real condition. Also add possessive 'building's design'. Suggestion: keep tenses consistent in conditional sentences: present + will for real present/future conditions.

× For example like some traditional Chinese building is very breathtaking especially when the nights off and the lights on.

✓ For example, some traditional Chinese buildings are very breathtaking, especially when the nights are off and the lights are on.

Multiple issues: unnecessary 'like' after 'for example', singular 'building' should be plural when speaking generally, and verbs 'are' are needed in the subordinate clause ('nights are off', 'lights are on'). Use commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: omit redundant words, match singular/plural appropriately, and include auxiliary verbs in clauses.

× It has always been my dream to visit one of the most famous building around the world, which is Eiffel Tower.

✓ It has always been my dream to visit one of the most famous buildings around the world, which is the Eiffel Tower.

Use plural 'buildings' when saying 'one of the most famous ...' Also use the definite article 'the' before proper names that commonly take it ('the Eiffel Tower'). Suggestion: 'one of the most famous buildings' and 'the Eiffel Tower'.

× I first knew it while I was in my middle school.

✓ I first learned about it while I was in middle school.

'Knew it' is unnatural for discovering information; use 'learned about it'. Also drop 'my' before 'middle school' in general usage. Suggestion: use 'learned about' for first encountering facts or places.

× I learned that it is it was for the trade show at that year.

✓ I learned that it was built for the trade show that year.

The original mixes 'is' and 'was' incorrectly and uses awkward phrasing 'at that year'. Use past tense 'was built' to describe a past purpose and 'that year' without 'at'. Suggestion: use simple past for completed historical facts and correct word order: 'built for the trade show that year.'

× After that, it has become a symbol of Paris and also a symbol of love it.

✓ After that, it became a symbol of Paris and also a symbol of love.

Tense inconsistency: use simple past 'became' to follow the previous past events. The trailing 'it' is redundant. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent and remove unnecessary words.

× Currently I actually live in one, so I know that there are a lot of inconvenience when you're living in a tall building.

✓ Currently I actually live in one, so I know that there are a lot of inconveniences when you're living in a tall building.

Countable noun 'inconvenience' should be plural 'inconveniences' when preceded by 'a lot of'. Suggestion: use plural with 'a lot of' for countable nouns.

× For example, every day you need to line up for the elevator and it costs a lot of.

✓ For example, every day you need to line up for the elevator and it costs a lot.

The phrase 'a lot of' requires a following noun; in this context use 'a lot' (as an adverbial phrase) to mean 'costs a lot' or add a noun like 'time' or 'money' after 'a lot of'. Suggestion: specify what is costly ('a lot of time' or 'a lot of money') or use 'costs a lot.'