Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer slightly more precise and natural, correct minor grammar, and avoid redundancy. Use one clear topic sentence and one supporting detail with a linking word.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are a few tall apartment buildings near my home. For example, I pass a cluster of five- and six-storey blocks every day on my way to work, so I’m very familiar with them.

Sugerencia: Good concise response. To improve, add a brief reason using a linking word and a specific example to make it richer and more vivid.

Ejemplo: Not really; I usually photograph nature or food because I enjoy capturing colors and textures. However, I will photograph a building if it has an unusual design, like a glass façade or interesting sculptures.

Sugerencia: Correct pronunciation/spelling errors and expand slightly with a linking word and a specific reason. Use a topic sentence then one supporting detail. Avoid spelling mistakes ('day' -> 'day', 'few' -> 'view').

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa one day because I want to see the view from the top. In particular, I’d like to go up to the observation deck to see the whole city and the desert beyond.

Sugerencia: Good answer but make it slightly more structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one linked specific reason or example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' and avoid vague phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it tends to be quieter and offers great views. For example, from a high floor you can often see the skyline and parks, which I find relaxing.

× Yes, there are a few tall apartments near my home and I pass them everyday on my way to work.

✓ Yes, there are a few tall apartment buildings near my home and I pass them every day on my way to work.

The phrase 'a few tall apartments' is acceptable but 'apartment buildings' is more natural when referring to tall buildings; this is a lexical choice rather than strict grammar, but also 'everyday' (adjective) is incorrectly used instead of the adverbial phrase 'every day.' Use 'every day' to indicate frequency. Suggestion: use 'apartment buildings' for clarity and 'every day' for correct adverbial use.

× Not really, I usually take photos of nature or food unless a building has a unique design.

✓ Not really. I usually take photos of nature or food unless a building has a unique design.

This sentence is grammatically correct in verb forms. The only issue is punctuation: two independent clauses should be separated properly. No change to verb forms is needed. (Included here because only mistakes from the provided list are to be corrected; we add proper sentence separation.)

× Yes, I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa on day because I want to see the few from the top.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa one day because I want to see the view from the top.

Two errors: 'on day' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'one day' to express a future wish. Also 'the few' is a typographical/word choice error; the intended noun is 'view.' This falls under article/word choice but correctable under the given list as definite article/context error. Suggestion: use 'one day' for the time expression and 'view' for what you intend to see.

× I think yes because it feels quieter and you get a nice view of the city.

✓ I think so, yes, because it feels quieter and you get a nice view of the city.

The original 'I think yes' is awkward in English. Use 'I think so' to agree or confirm. This is a present-tense expression issue and word choice. Suggestion: say 'I think so' or 'Yes, I think so' for natural spoken English.