Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but there are small grammar and phrasing issues and slightly repetitive ideas. Make the topic sentence more direct, correct minor errors (e.g. 'made up of' not 'made-up of'), and avoid repeating similar points. Add one specific detail to enrich the answer.

Ejemplo: No, my neighborhood is mostly rural, so there are very few tall buildings. I can see only two or three mid-rise blocks from my window, while most properties are single-storey houses and small farms. Because of this, the skyline looks quite low and green.

Sugerencia: Good content and a relevant example, but fix grammar ('a photos' → 'photos' or 'a photo') and streamline the response to be more concise. Use a linking phrase to connect the general habit and the specific example, and include a brief reason why you photograph buildings.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often photograph interesting buildings when I visit cities. For instance, last week in Tokyo I took pictures of several colorful skyscrapers because their designs were unique and I wanted a visual memory of them.

Sugerencia: Answer is relevant but contains awkward phrasing and repetition ('very tall and expensive' and 'very popular and luxurious'). Make the topic sentence direct, reduce redundancy, and add a specific reason why you want to visit (e.g. observation deck, view, architecture).

Ejemplo: Yes, I'd love to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it's the tallest building in the world. I'd like to go up to its observation deck to see the panoramic views and study its impressive modern architecture.

Sugerencia: Content is clear but contains grammatical errors and slightly awkward phrasing. Start with a direct topic sentence, fix grammar ('I prefer living in a house which has a garden'), and give one specific detail explaining why (e.g. gardening, fresh air). Use a linking word to connect preference and reason.

Ejemplo: No, I would not. I prefer living in a house with a garden because I enjoy gardening and having easy access to fresh air and greenery rather than living high above the ground.

× Most of the area is made-up of low houses and small farms.

✓ Most of the area is made up of low houses and small farms.

Hyphenation is incorrect: 'made up of' is a phrasal adjective and should not be hyphenated when used in this passive construction. Use 'made up of' (three separate words). Also, 'area' is uncountable here so 'most of the area is made up of' is correct.

× Whenever I visit a city, I usually take a photos of beautiful buildings and skyscrapers.

✓ Whenever I visit a city, I usually take photos of beautiful buildings and skyscrapers.

The article 'a' cannot be used with the plural noun 'photos'. Remove 'a' to match plural 'photos'. If intending singular, use 'a photo' or 'a photograph'.

× For example, last week I went to Tokyo and I saw a lot of colorful skyscrapers and it made me want to take a picture so that I can remember it in the future.

✓ For example, last week I went to Tokyo and saw a lot of colorful skyscrapers, and it made me want to take a picture so that I could remember it in the future.

Sequence of tenses: the main clause is in the past ('went', 'saw', 'made'), so the subordinate clause expressing ability to remember should use past in modality: 'could' instead of 'can'. Also, omit repeated 'I' before 'saw' for conciseness. Use a comma before 'and' joining two independent clauses.

× I want to visit a very tall and expensive building in Dubai which is called Burj Khalifa.

✓ I want to visit a very tall and expensive building in Dubai called the Burj Khalifa.

Use the definite article 'the' before famous buildings' names when followed by a descriptive phrase. Also, 'which is called' is wordy; use reduced relative clause 'called the Burj Khalifa'.

× That building is very popular and luxurious, so I think it's once in a lifetime opportunity.

✓ That building is very popular and luxurious, so I think it's a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity.

Missing article 'a' before 'once-in-a-lifetime opportunity' and hyphenation required for the compound adjective used before a noun: 'once-in-a-lifetime'. Without 'a' the noun phrase is ungrammatical.

× For my preference, I don't like to live in a tall building because I think that I like nature more, so I prefer living in a house which have a garden so I can plant trees and vegetables.

✓ Personally, I don't like living in a tall building because I prefer nature, so I prefer living in a house that has a garden where I can plant trees and vegetables.

Multiple issues: 'For my preference' is unnatural; use 'Personally' or 'As for my preference'. 'I don't like to live' changed to 'I don't like living' for natural expression. 'I think that I like nature more' is wordy and awkward; use 'I prefer nature'. Relative clause: 'which have a garden' is incorrect because 'house' is singular, so verb must be 'has' (singular) — this is a singular/plural and subject-verb agreement issue; also use 'that' for defining relative clauses. Use 'where' to indicate purpose/location for planting. Overall restructure improves clarity.