Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 答题总体清晰，但有几个问题影响表达分：1) 有重复词（"my my"）和语法错误（"refresh"应为形容词或短语如"feel refreshed"）；2) 句子衔接较弱，使用连接词可以更自然；3) 句子有停顿和填充词（"Umm"），应尽量减少；4) 可把细节更具体化（描述看到的景色或感受）。改进建议：练习用一到两句主题句直接回答，然后用一到两句具体支持句，注意语法和词形变化，使用连词如"because"、"so"或"for example"，并去掉多余重复与填充词。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car, especially in a new place. I find watching the landscape relaxing because it gives my eyes a break from screens and helps me notice local details, such as unusual buildings or lush countryside.

Sugerencia: 回答直接且理由明确，但存在小问题：1) 语法和用词需要修正（"too long time"应为"for too long"；"I would get a car sick"应为"I get carsick"或"I would get carsick"）；2) 可用连接词使句子更流畅；3) 去掉填充词（"Uh"）并稍微扩展细节（例如描述何种场景会拍照）。改进建议：用一两句表达立场和原因，再补充一两个具体情境或例外，注意时态与固定搭配。

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't take photos from a moving car because I get carsick if I stare at a screen or camera for too long. Instead, I prefer to simply enjoy the view, although I might take a quick picture when we stop at a scenic viewpoint.

Sugerencia: 回答含混且语法错误较多：1) 开头不清晰（"I, people like the sea"混淆主语）；2) 时态和句子结构有错误（"I'm live"应为"I live"；标点与连词使用不当）；3) 表达缺乏连贯性和具体细节，重复填充词较多；4) 建议先给出直接偏好句，然后解释原因并举具体例子（如风景、活动或美食）。练习把思想按逻辑顺序组织：主题句+原因+具体例子。

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because I live in Chongqing, which is surrounded by mountains, so I see mountain scenery all the time. Visiting the coast would be a new experience for me—I could enjoy beaches, swim in the sea, and try fresh seafood.

× For me, it makes me feel relaxing and refresh.

✓ For me, it makes me feel relaxed and refreshed.

原句中使用了现在分词 "relaxing" 和不带-ed 的动词 "refresh" 来描述人的感受，这是不合适的。用来描述感受时应使用形容词或过去分词形式作表语："relaxed"（感到放松）和"refreshed"（感到精神焕发）。建议记住：当要表达人感到某种状态，用形容词/过去分词而不是动名词。

× Otherwise it helps my my eyes. Umm, take a break from my phone.

✓ Also, it helps my eyes by giving them a break from my phone.

原句中断句与词序混乱，"Otherwise" 用法不当且有重复单词 "my my"。此外"take a break from my phone" 缺少主语和连接，应该与前句连成完整句子。建议将表示附加原因的词改为 "Also" 或 "Besides"，并将动作作为现在时的完整短语连入句子。

× No, I don't like to take photos of the scenery outside the car window because for me I would get a car sick if I focus on my phone or camera for too long time.

✓ No, I don't like to take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I would get car sick if I focused on my phone or camera for too long.

原句中时态与情态动词混用不当：条件句应使用与过去式形式搭配的虚拟语气 "would + 动词" 从句中通常用过去式（这里是 "focused"）表示与现在事实相反的情况。另外，短语应为 "get car sick" 而不是 "get a car sick"，以及 "for too long" 更自然。建议学习虚拟语气中主句与从句的时态配合。

× Uh, otherwise I just want to enjoy the view at the moment instead of taking pictures.

✓ I just want to enjoy the view in the moment instead of taking pictures.

原句中时态总体可以接受，但介词搭配更自然的是 "in the moment" 或 "at the moment" 取决含义。这里要强调当下享受风景，用 "in the moment" 更贴切。建议注意固定搭配差异。

× I, people like the sea because for me, I'm live in the Chongqing, which place full of mountains, So I see the different kinds of mountains.

✓ I prefer the sea because I live in Chongqing, which is full of mountains, so I often see different kinds of mountains.

原句结构混乱：多余的主语 "people" 与 "I" 冲突，动词 "I'm live" 错误（不应同时用助动词和动词原形），从句缺少系动词（"which place full" 应为 "which is full"），以及大小写和标点需调整。建议保持主语一致，正确使用系动词，连词小写并保持句子流畅。

× Uh, I want to see some special place like sea. Just, I want, I can test some seafood, uh.

✓ I want to see a special place like the sea. Also, I can try some seafood there.

原句中名词、冠词使用不当：应为 "a special place"（单数可数名词需冠词），"the sea" 更自然表示那种环境；"test some seafood" 错用动词，应为 "try some seafood" 表示品尝。建议记住可数名词前需要恰当冠词，并使用固定搭配 "try seafood" 表示尝试食物。