Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì, động từ chia, danh từ/động từ), tránh lặp từ và trình bày câu rõ ràng hơn. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ có liên kết logic. Ví dụ: dùng 'when I travel' thay vì 'when I travelling', 'it makes me feel comfortable' thay vì 'it's make me feel comfortable', và tránh lặp 'many many' bằng 'many' hoặc 'a lot of'. Có thể dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so' để liên kết ý rõ ràng.

Ejemplo: Yes. When I travel by bus or car, I often look out of the window because it makes me feel relaxed. I enjoy spotting different buildings and landscapes along the route, which gives me new ideas about places I might visit in the future.

Sugerencia: Sửa lỗi từ vựng và cấu trúc (ví dụ 'shave remember' sai; dùng 'save' hoặc 'remember' đúng cách). Nên nói rõ mục đích chụp ảnh và cung cấp một chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ để nối ý. Tránh lỗi chính tả và chọn từ phù hợp như 'capture' hoặc 'preserve' thay vì 'shave'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos through the car window because I want to capture interesting landscapes and local life. These pictures help me remember special moments and places I visited.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng (ví dụ 'I prefer the mountains'). Sửa ngữ pháp và loại bỏ các từ thừa ('it's than than'). Bổ sung lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn. Dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so' để giải thích lựa chọn, và tránh câu không hoàn chỉnh.

Ejemplo: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and exploring nature. For example, when I visit mountains I can discover waterfalls, diverse plants and quiet trails, which I find more interesting than crowded beaches.

× Yes, when I travelling by bus or car I often look out the window at the scenery because it's make me feel comfortable.

✓ Yes, when I travel by bus or car I often look out the window at the scenery because it makes me feel comfortable.

The verb form 'travelling' after 'when I' should be the base form 'travel' to match simple present tense; this is a present tense issue. Also 'it's make' is incorrect subject-verb agreement in present tense: with subject 'it' the verb requires the third person singular form 'makes'. Suggestion: Use simple present forms for habitual actions: 'I travel' and 'it makes'.

× I can see many many new things and it's cover new thing.

✓ I can see many new things and it covers new things.

The phrase 'it's cover' mixes 'it is' with a base verb; to express habitual fact in present simple use 'it covers' (third person singular). Also plural 'many new things' should be consistent. This is an issue with incorrect verb form (-ing/present participle misuse) and subject-verb agreement; correct by using 'it covers' and plural 'new things'.

× I am really into taking photos of scenery outside the car window because I can shave remember about the landscapes or people.

✓ I am really into taking photos of the scenery outside the car window because I can have memories of the landscapes or people.

The original contains 'shave remember' which is incorrect word choice and form. Replace with 'have memories' or 'remember' depending on meaning. 'Taking photos' is fine; change 'scenery' to 'the scenery' for specificity. This falls under incorrect verb form/phrase and word choice; use 'have memories' or 'remember' to convey retaining recollection: 'I can remember the landscapes or people' or 'I can have memories of them'.

× Well, I see the mountains, it's very interesting. So I prefer it's than than the sea.

✓ Well, I like the mountains; they are very interesting. So I prefer them to the sea.

Using 'it's' to refer to mountains is incorrect pronoun reference; mountains are plural, so use 'they'. 'Prefer' requires an object and the pattern 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer it's than than'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and incorrect comparative structure. Suggestion: Use plural pronoun 'they' and the correct comparative structure 'prefer X to Y'.

× When I go to the mountain I can find many interesting things.

✓ When I go to the mountains I can find many interesting things.

The singular 'the mountain' is odd when speaking generally; use the plural 'the mountains' to match earlier preference and general meaning. This is a present tense/contextual noun number issue (singular/plural choice). Suggestion: Use 'the mountains' for general visits to mountainous areas.