Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, umm) and grammar errors (use correct tense and verbs). Add one specific detail and a linking word to make it coherent. Keep the answer within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, last month I watched rolling hills and small farms pass by, which I find relaxing and interesting.

Sugerencia: Avoid hesitations and use correct past tense and verbs. Give one clear example with a linking phrase (for example/last night) and one detail about why you took photos. Limit to 2–3 sentences and remove repetitive words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos through the car window. For example, last night when my husband and I crossed a bridge, I took several pictures of the river because the lights and reflections looked beautiful.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear preference sentence and give specific reasons using linking words (because/therefore). Use correct vocabulary and grammar (prefer the sea, not Seaview; I can't go to the mountains). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid fillers.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea, although I like mountains too. I choose the sea because I enjoy relaxing walks on the beach and I find it easier to access than high mountain trails.

× Yes, definitely. Uh, when I was uh, traveling by bus or car, I always uh, seen umm, see a very beautiful view, umm.

✓ Yes, definitely. When I was traveling by bus or car, I always saw a very beautiful view.

The verb 'seen' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary (have/has/had). The speaker intended a simple past action, so use the simple past 'saw'. Also remove filler words and unnecessary verbs to make the sentence grammatical and clear. Suggestion: Use 'saw' for simple past observations (I saw a beautiful view).

× With the help of window and I enhance the beauty of nature as well.

✓ Through the window, I could appreciate the beauty of nature as well.

The phrase 'with the help of window' is unidiomatic; 'through the window' or 'from the window' is correct. 'Enhance' is not appropriate because the speaker cannot enhance nature; 'appreciate' or 'enjoy' fits the intended meaning. Also add modal or past tense ('could') to fit narrative. Suggestion: Use 'through/from the window' and verbs like 'appreciate' or 'enjoy'.

× Yup, Uh, yes, definitely. Uh, I remember, uh, when, uh, last night I go to, I went to the market with my husband and uh, we uh, were going on, uh, uh, specific bridge and I click many pictures on our window and enhance.

✓ Yes, I remember. Last night I went to the market with my husband, we were going over a bridge, and I took many pictures through the window.

Multiple tense and verb form errors: 'go to' should be 'went to' for past; 'were going on a specific bridge' is better as 'were going over a bridge'; 'click many pictures' is incorrect verb choice and tense—use simple past 'took many pictures'; 'on our window and enhance' is unclear—use 'through the window'. The sentence also needs punctuation and reduced fillers. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense verbs (went, were going, took) and prepositions ('over a bridge', 'through the window').

× Umm, honestly speaking, I prefer both, but uh, my most focus on uh, Seaview.

✓ Honestly, I prefer both, but I focus more on the sea view.

'My most focus on' is an incorrect pronoun/possessive and word order. Use the subject 'I' and the phrasal structure 'focus more on' followed by the noun 'the sea view'. Also 'Seaview' should be two words and usually uses the definite article 'the'. Suggestion: Use 'I focus more on the sea view' or 'I prefer the sea view more'.

× There are many reasons for that. First of all, uh, mountains, uh, height is so high and I can't umm umm umm go a mountain.

✓ There are many reasons for that. First of all, the mountains are very high and I can't go to the mountains.

'Mountains, height is so high' mixes singular and plural; use 'the mountains are very high'. 'Go a mountain' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'go to the mountains' or 'climb a mountain'. Also use consistent article usage: 'the mountains' or 'a mountain' depending on meaning. Suggestion: Say 'the mountains are very high' and 'I can't go to the mountains' or 'I can't climb a mountain'.

× So sea view is a perfect for me.

✓ So the sea view is perfect for me.

Article usage is incorrect: use the definite article 'the' before 'sea view'. Also 'a perfect' is incomplete without a noun—'perfect' as an adjective should be followed by 'for me' without 'a'. Suggestion: Use 'the sea view is perfect for me' or 'a sea view is perfect for me' depending on context.'