Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer grammatically consistent, be more concise, and add one specific supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence (present tense), then briefly explain why using a linking word. Avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because it helps me relax. For example, seeing trees and fields pass by and feeling the fresh air makes the journey pleasant and reduces my stress.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and one or two clear reasons with a concrete example. Use linking words (for example, because) and avoid unclear phrases like "that additional and culture look."

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the window because I want to remember the views. For example, I take pictures of interesting landscapes or local people in traditional clothes so I can look back at them later.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly by choosing one (mountains or the sea) and give specific reasons with one short example. Use correct tense and linking words, and avoid repeating phrases. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and the fresh, cool air. For example, last month I visited Shimla and the high peaks seemed to touch the clouds, which was an unforgettable view and made me feel peaceful.

× Of course I look at the window when I was travelling because fresh air touched on my face and I feel so relaxed and comfortable and it's often too incredible feelings and I feel so comfortable.

✓ Of course I look out of the window when I am travelling because the fresh air touches my face and I feel relaxed and comfortable; it is often an incredible feeling.

Multiple tense inconsistencies: the sentence mixes past ('was travelling', 'touched') with present ('look', 'feel'). The question is general habitual behaviour, so present simple or present continuous is appropriate. Also correct preposition use ('look out of the window') and article usage ('the fresh air'). Use 'touches my face' (third person singular) and singular 'feeling'. Suggestion: keep consistent present tense for habits and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct prepositions and articles.

× Yes, I take the many pictures because I capture the memories of nature and sometime many people wear that additional and culture look and I capture the many memories and take the photos.

✓ Yes, I take many pictures because I like to capture memories of nature; sometimes many people wear traditional clothes and show their cultural appearance, so I capture those memories with photos.

Problems include incorrect article/quantifier use ('the many pictures' -> 'many pictures'), adverb form ('sometime' -> 'sometimes'), and unclear phrasing ('wear that additional and culture look'). The context is habitual present, so present simple is used. Also improved clarity: 'traditional clothes' and 'capture those memories with photos.' Ensure correct quantifiers, adverbs, and clearer noun phrases.

× Yes, I prefer the mountains and sea. Last month I went to the Shimla and there are very big mountains and they look like touch to the cloud and and I watched that and I feel so incredible to watch them and I.

✓ Yes, I prefer the mountains and the sea. Last month I went to Shimla; there were very big mountains that seemed to touch the clouds and I felt it was incredible to watch them.

Article misuse: 'the Shimla' is incorrect—use 'Shimla' without 'the'. Tense inconsistency: mix of present ('are', 'look') and past ('last month I went')—use past tense for a past visit. Plural nouns and agreement: 'cloud' -> 'clouds'; verb forms: 'seemed to touch' and 'I felt it was incredible'. Remove extra conjunctions and incomplete ending. Suggestion: use past tense for past events, correct articles for place names, and ensure noun plurality and complete sentence structure.