Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: حاول جعل إجابتك أكثر وضوحًا وصحة نحوية مع جمل أقصر ومنظمة. ابدأ بجملة موضوعية مباشرة (نعم أو لا + سبب قصير)، ثم أضف تفصيلًا واحدًا مرتبطًا باستخدام أدوات ربط بسيطة مثل “because” أو “so”. تجنب الأخطاء النحوية مثل صيغة الفعل بعد ‘watching’ واستخدم تعابير طبيعية أكثر (مثلاً “I feel relaxed” بدلاً من “I feel chill”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel by bus, car, or airplane because I enjoy watching the changing scenery. For example, I often sit by the window and relax while thinking about plans or ideas, so it helps me clear my mind.

Sugerencia: صحح الأخطاء النحوية وعبّر بصورة أبسط وأكثر طبيعية. استبدل العبارات المربكة مثل “Without no doubt” بعبارات صحيحة مثل “Without a doubt”. ضع سببًا واحدًا واضحًا يدعم إجابتك (مثلاً التذكارات أو المشاركة مع العائلة) وتجنب التكرار والكلمات غير المكتملة.

Ejemplo: Without a doubt, I often take photos of the scenery because they help me remember special moments. I usually share these photos with my family and my son so we can enjoy the memories together.

Sugerencia: اجعل إجابتك أكثر تنظيمًا واستخدم أوصافًا دقيقة ومفردات صحيحة. ابدأ بجملة واضحة توضح تفضيلك ثم اذكر سببين موجزين مدعومين بتفاصيل محددة. صَدِّق الأخطاء في تركيب الجملة مثل ‘there is many action’ و‘I can swimming’ إلى أشكال صحيحة.

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because I find it relaxing and there are many activities to enjoy. For example, I like swimming and walking along the beach with my family, which makes our time together more fun.

× Absolutely, I do that when I travel by the bus or the car or even the airplane.

✓ Absolutely, I do that when I travel by bus, by car, or even by plane.

Use of definite article 'the' before modes of transport is incorrect here. In general expressions we say 'by bus', 'by car', 'by plane' without 'the'. Also 'airplane' can be 'plane' for natural phrasing.

× I sit at the window and watching by it.

✓ I sit by the window and watch it.

Parallel structure requires base form 'watch' after 'sit' (simple present). 'Watching' is a gerund/participle and doesn't fit without an auxiliary. 'by the window' is the natural prepositional phrase; 'watch it' is clearer than 'watching by it'.

× I feel chill when I do this and let me thinking about multiple things in my life and fix it.

✓ I feel relaxed when I do this, and it makes me think about many things in my life and helps me sort them out.

'Feel chill' is non-idiomatic; use 'feel relaxed' or 'feel chilled'. 'let me thinking' is incorrect structure: use 'it makes me think' or 'it lets me think'. 'multiple things' is grammatical but 'many things' is more natural; 'fix it' is vague — use 'sort them out' or 'resolve them'.

× Without no doubt, it is an essential something that I do when I traveled because it's, uh, memorized and I can share it with my family and my son and it's a beautiful thing that.

✓ Without a doubt, taking photos is something I always do when I travel because it helps me remember the trip and I can share the photos with my family and my son; it's a beautiful thing.

'Without no doubt' is a double negative; correct phrase is 'without a doubt'. 'essential something' is incorrect collocation — use 'something' or 'an essential thing' or specify 'taking photos'. Past tense 'traveled' conflicts with present general habit — use present 'travel'. 'memorized' is incorrect here; use 'helps me remember' or 'is memorable'.

× It's, uh, memorized and I can share it with my family and my son and it's a beautiful thing that.

✓ It helps me remember the trip, and I can share it with my family and my son; it's a beautiful thing.

'Memorized' is wrong verb form; 'help me remember' conveys meaning. Sentence fragment 'it's a beautiful thing that' is incomplete; remove 'that' or finish the clause.

× It's relevant and chilly when I sit at the sea and there is many action that I can do it with the people that I love and I can swimming as an example or.

✓ It's relaxing and cool when I sit by the sea, and there are many activities I can do with the people I love, for example I can go swimming.

'Relevant' is wrong word; use 'relaxing' or 'refreshing'. 'Chilly' acceptable but 'cool' fits better. Use 'sit by the sea' not 'sit at the sea'. 'There is many action' is subject-verb agreement and countability error — use 'there are many activities'. 'that I can do it' has extraneous 'it' and wrong structure; use 'that I can do' or 'I can do with'. 'I can swimming' is incorrect: after modal 'can' use base verb 'swim' or phrase 'go swimming'.