Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and clear: answer the question about views (landscapes/scenery), not foods. Use a concise topic sentence, then 1–2 supporting details with linking words. Correct grammar (articles, plural forms) and choose precise vocabulary (views, scenery, memories). Avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines and seaside landscapes because they remind me of special moments; these images help me remember the atmosphere and colors of each place.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference statement, then support it with specific reasons using linking words (because, for example). Avoid unclear phrases and repetition, and fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles). Use concrete descriptors (skyscrapers, busy streets) rather than vague or invented terms.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy of tall buildings and busy streets. For example, city skylines at night look dramatic and the variety of architecture gives me lots of interesting photo opportunities.

Sugerencia: State your preference directly (my country/other countries) and give specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague praise and unnecessary repetition. Mention particular places or features (modern malls, historic mosques, parks) and explain why they matter to you.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a mix of modern architecture and cultural landmarks. For example, I like photographing the contrast between sleek shopping malls and historic mosques, as well as nearby parks that add greenery to the cityscape.

× Yes, I like to take the pictures of the different foods because the different views are taken by the different memories and it's very good memories in our mind.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures of different foods because different views are captured by different memories, and they create very good memories in our minds.

Errors: unnecessary definite articles ('the pictures', 'the different foods') and incorrect phrase 'views are taken by the different memories'. Also 'it's very good memories' mixes singular 'it' with plural 'memories'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary 'the', use active or correct passive phrasing ('captured by memories'), match number (they/create memories) and plural possessive ('our minds'). Grammar problem type IDs: 22, 26, 14.

× Yeah, I prefer views in the urban areas and because the open areas have has a lot of tall buildings and a lot of lot of imaginary views in our mind capture and the topami level is increased and the pressure had been filled.

✓ Yes, I prefer views in urban areas because the open areas have a lot of tall buildings and many imaginative views in our minds; the noise level increases and the pressure feels higher.

Errors: unnecessary definite article ('the urban areas'), incorrect verb form 'have has' (double verb), repetition 'a lot of lot of', incorrect noun phrase 'imaginary views in our mind capture', incorrect term 'topami level' likely intended 'noise level', and wrong tense 'had been filled'. Suggestions: remove 'the' before general areas, use single correct verb 'have', use 'many' or 'a lot of' once, use 'imaginative views in our minds', correct vocabulary to 'noise level', and use present tense 'increases' and present simple 'feels higher'. Grammar problem type IDs: 22, 27, 26.

× Yes, I prefer using my country because I have a lot of tall buildings in the clouds of very, very good, very good furnished shopping malls and very, very good mosque and many other green areas. So that's why.

✓ Yes, I prefer my country because it has many tall buildings, very well-furnished shopping malls, a beautiful mosque, and many green areas.

Errors: awkward 'preferring using my country' (use 'prefer my country'), incorrect phrase 'in the clouds of', repetitive 'very, very good', missing article before 'mosque' or use adjective 'a beautiful mosque', and excessive words 'So that's why.' Suggestions: use 'it has' to describe features, replace repetition with concise modifiers ('very well-furnished'), include articles where needed, and end simply. Grammar problem type IDs: 22, 26, 14.