Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating words like "like" and filler phrases. Also vary vocabulary (e.g., "capture" instead of "click") and mention a short reason or example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different landscapes, especially when I travel. For example, I often capture rivers and mountain vistas because their colours and textures look great in pictures, and then I share the best shots with my friends online.

Sugerencia: Make a complete, fluent statement with reasons and avoid hesitation. Start with a clear preference, then give two specific reasons linked logically (use linking words like "because" and "for example"). Finish the sentence; do not trail off.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because farmland and open fields feel peaceful and less crowded. For example, I enjoy seeing rolling fields and fences, and I find urban skylines with tall buildings and bright lights rather noisy and impersonal.

Sugerencia: Give a concise reasoned answer without fillers and complete your final thought. Use linking words and one specific example or comparison. Replace vague phrases with concrete details (e.g., name a plant or place) and avoid repeating words.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my current country, Australia, because of its diverse natural scenery and abundant native plants. For instance, I love photographing eucalyptus forests and coastal heathlands, which offer colourful wildflowers and interesting textures that I don't often see elsewhere.

× I like to click pictures with scenic beauty and rivers flowing by.

✓ I like taking pictures of scenic beauty and rivers flowing by.

Using 'like to click pictures' is not incorrect but 'click pictures' is informal and 'taking pictures' matches the earlier phrasing. This maintains consistent verb form 'taking' (present participle) after 'like' when describing a general preference. Suggest using 'take/taking pictures' in spoken and written contexts for naturalness.

× I then share it with my friends and family online.

✓ I then share them with my friends and family online.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'pictures' (plural). Replace with 'them' to agree in number. Also ensure plural agreement between antecedent and pronoun.

× I prefer views in rural areas where we have farm lands spread across.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas where we have farmland spread across.

'Farm lands' is nonstandard; use the uncountable noun 'farmland' or 'farmlands' depending on meaning. 'Farmland' is more natural here. This fixes singular/plural/word-formation usage.

× I do not like the views in the urban areas with tall buildings and uh, lightings because I feel.

✓ I do not like the views in urban areas with tall buildings and lighting because I feel they are too busy.

'The urban areas' is unnecessarily definite; 'urban areas' is preferred. 'Lightings' is incorrect—use 'lighting' (uncountable) or 'lights' if plural countable. The original sentence also ends incomplete ('because I feel.'); complete the clause with the speaker's feeling. This corrects adjective/article choice and word form and completes the thought.

× I prefer views in my own country where I am living here right now in Australia because, uh, it is very beautiful, full of lush green, umm, trees and flowers.

✓ I prefer views in my own country where I am living right now, Australia, because it is very beautiful and full of lush green trees and flowers.

The phrase 'where I am living here right now in Australia' is redundant: both 'where' and 'here' refer to location. Remove 'here' for clarity. Also 'full of lush green, umm, trees and flowers' needs 'and' without unnecessary commas. This corrects the redundancy and word order in the clause introduced by 'where'.

× We have various kinds of flowering and fruit trees here in Australia and.

✓ We have various kinds of flowering and fruit trees here in Australia.

The sentence ends with an extraneous conjunction 'and' making it incomplete. Remove the final 'and' to complete the sentence. No plural change needed but the sentence structure must be finished.