Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên, độ rõ ràng và cấu trúc câu. Tránh tiếng lấp đầy (uh) và lặp từ không cần thiết như “memories about the beautiful memories”. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi đưa thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại cảnh, khi nào chụp và mục đích). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản (because, so, when) để làm ý mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because I love capturing beautiful scenery. For example, I often photograph sunsets and mountain landscapes when I travel, so I can remember the atmosphere and colors later.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng (urban or rural). Tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác và tiếng lặp, và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g., "urban", "rural", "peaceful"). Giải thích lý do ngắn gọn với một ví dụ cụ thể. Giữ câu không quá dài – tối đa 3–4 câu.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more peaceful than busy cities. For instance, I like photographing lakes and fields when I visit the countryside because the light and atmosphere are more relaxing.

Sugerencia: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích rõ ràng bằng ngôn ngữ chính xác. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thiếu động từ hoặc từ không phù hợp (e.g., “it all so noisy views”, “quit my country”). Nên nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: landscapes, accessibility, sentimental reasons) và kết thúc bằng một câu ngắn gọn. Giữ tối đa 4 câu.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has stunning mountains and familiar landscapes. I also enjoy local places because they are easy to reach and remind me of home, so I usually choose to photograph scenes here rather than abroad.

× Uh, just because I like the different scenery.

✓ Uh, just because I like different scenery.

Using 'the' before 'different scenery' is unnecessary here; 'scenery' is an uncountable noun and does not require 'the' when speaking generally. Remove 'the' to sound natural. Suggestion: Use 'different scenery' or 'various scenery' to refer generally to types of views.

× So when I see the beauty thing, I often take a picture to, uh, remind my memories about the beautiful memories.

✓ So when I see something beautiful, I often take a picture to remind myself of the memory.

Multiple issues: 'beauty thing' is incorrect noun phrase; use 'something beautiful'. 'Remind my memories about the beautiful memories' is ungrammatical: the verb 'remind' needs an object and 'myself' is the reflexive pronoun. Also 'remind of' is the correct preposition. Use simple noun 'memory' or 'memories'. Suggestion: Say 'remind myself of the memory' or better 'help me remember the moment'.

× I think the second option because, uh, I think wouldn't like popular, popular than the, uh, error.

✓ I prefer the second option because I don't like places that are more popular or crowded.

Original contains unclear and incorrect comparative phrasing. Use 'more popular' to compare, and 'don't like' for negative preference. 'Crowded' is a better adjective to describe popularity of places. Suggestion: Use 'more popular' or 'more crowded' when comparing two types of places.

× So I want to appease scenery, so I often take pictures in the beautiful sceneries when my view.

✓ I want peaceful scenery, so I often take pictures of beautiful landscapes when I travel.

'Appease scenery' is incorrect; likely meant 'peaceful scenery'. 'Sceneries' is not commonly used; use 'scenery' or 'landscapes'. 'Take pictures in' should be 'take pictures of'. 'When my view' is unclear; use 'when I travel' or 'when I see them'. Suggestion: Use 'peaceful scenery' or 'beautiful landscapes' and 'take pictures of'.

× I think it's my own country because in my country have very beautiful scenery, mountain it all so noisy views.

✓ I prefer my own country because my country has very beautiful scenery, such as mountains and peaceful views.

Missing subject with 'have': English requires subject-verb structure 'my country has'. 'Mountain it all so noisy views' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'mountains and peaceful views'. 'Noisy' contradicts 'beautiful' and context. Suggestion: Use 'my country has' and list examples with 'such as'.

× I love my country and I seem to quit my country so I don't like to go other country to see anything.

✓ I love my country and I seem to stay in my country, so I don't like to go to other countries to see things.

'Quit my country' is wrong verb choice; 'quit' means to leave permanently and is informal. Likely meant 'stay in' or 'remain in'. 'Go other country' lacks preposition and plural agreement: use 'go to other countries'. 'See anything' is negative and awkward here; use 'see things' or 'see other places'. Suggestion: Use 'stay in my country' or 'remain in my country' and 'go to other countries'.