Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be careful with grammar (verb forms, articles) and use a slightly more natural, concise structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific examples linked with a connector. Avoid repetition and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of beautiful views. For example, when I go hiking I often take many landscape shots, and I always photograph the sea when I visit the beach because the light there is usually very dramatic.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar (comparative form, plural/singular, verb agreement) and make your reason more specific and coherent. Use a linking word to connect preference and reason, and give one clear supporting detail. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I love nature and the peace of the countryside. For instance, I enjoy walking among fields and trees where there is less noise and more fresh air.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct answer first (choose one or say ‘both’), then explain briefly with a specific reason. Fix phrasing (e.g., “I don’t have an answer to that question”, “I feel attached to my country”) and avoid unfinished sentences. One or two sentences are enough.

Ejemplo: I’m torn, but if I had to choose I’d say I prefer views in my own country because I feel attached to even small places there. However, I also enjoy sightseeing abroad because different landscapes and cultures are fascinating.

× I like taking picture of whatever place I seen is stunning.

✓ I like taking pictures of places I have seen that are stunning.

The student used 'seen' without the auxiliary 'have'; here a present perfect is required to describe experiences up to now. Also 'picture' should be plural and 'place' should be plural; add 'that' to connect the clause. Suggestion: use present perfect 'have seen' and plural nouns when referring to multiple items.

× For example if I go hiking I would take a lot of picture or if I go to beach I definitely would.

✓ For example, if I go hiking I would take a lot of pictures, or if I go to the beach I definitely would.

'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' because 'a lot of' refers to many items. Also 'beach' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific location type in general statements. Add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use plural nouns after quantifiers and include 'the' before 'beach'.

× For me personally I like rural area than city because I love nature, I like being outside, feeling peace and the countryside.

✓ For me personally I prefer rural areas to the city because I love nature; I like being outside, feeling peaceful, and enjoying the countryside.

The original mixes structures: 'like rural area than city' is incorrect. Use 'prefer X to Y' or 'like X more than Y'. Also 'rural area' and 'city' should be plural or definite: 'rural areas' and 'the city' are better. 'Feeling peace' is unnatural; use the adjective 'peaceful' or phrase 'feeling peace' reworded to 'feeling peaceful'. Suggestion: use 'prefer ... to ...' and correct noun forms and adjective use.

× It have the same meaning to me.

✓ It has the same meaning to me.

The subject 'It' requires the third person singular verb 'has', not 'have'. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with singular subject by using 'has'.

× I can.

✓ I can, too.

'I can' is a fragment and unclear. Likely the student meant to agree with the previous statement ('I can, too' or 'So can I'). Suggestion: complete the response with an appropriate phrase to show agreement.

× Honestly I don't have answer of this question because I love my country, I love every small place of it.

✓ Honestly, I don't have an answer to this question because I love my country; I love every small part of it.

'Have answer of this question' is incorrect word order and preposition use. Use 'have an answer to this question'. Also 'place of it' is awkward; 'part of it' or 'place in it' is better. Suggestion: use correct article 'an' and preposition 'to', and choose a natural noun 'part' or 'place in it'.

× I have feeling for it but the.

✓ I have strong feelings for it, but I'm not sure which I prefer.

The original is an incomplete sentence and unclear ('but the.'). It needs completion to express contrast. Also 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' or 'a feeling'. Suggestion: finish the thought and use plural noun 'feelings' or specify the uncertainty clearly.