Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, correct grammar, and organise your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by 1–2 supporting details. Avoid repetition and use linking words (for example, "because" once). Include specific examples of what you photograph and why.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love nature. For example, I often photograph sunsets and sunrises since the colours and light are very beautiful. I also like capturing weather scenes like misty mornings because they create a calm atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear direct answer (urban or rural), then give two specific reasons, using correct grammar and linking words (e.g., "because", "also"). Avoid unclear phrases like "blaze life"; use precise vocabulary such as "peaceful atmosphere" or "natural sounds."

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they have a peaceful atmosphere and pleasant natural sounds, such as birdsong in the morning. Also, rural places have less traffic noise, so photos feel calmer and more relaxing.

Sugerencia: Answer directly that you like both (if that is your view), then explain with 1–2 clear, specific reasons and use linking words like "however" or "also". Correct phrases like "make us a membrane" to "create lasting memories." Keep sentences short and grammatical.

Ejemplo: I like views in both my own country and other countries. In my country I enjoy familiar landscapes and local traditions, while in other countries I like discovering different scenery and cultures. Travel photos from abroad help me create lasting memories.

× 'Yes, I like taking picture of different because because our nature is very good and our beauty is so much good.'

✓ 'Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because our nature is very beautiful.'

'The noun "picture" should be plural "pictures" to match taking multiple photos; "different" needs a noun "views". "Because because" is duplicated; remove one. "Our beauty is so much good" is ungrammatical; use "our nature is very beautiful." Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to more than one item and simplify redundant words.'

× 'I have a childhood dreams of that I have to clicking a picture of a many views like a weather, sunset, sunrise or.'

✓ 'I have a childhood dream that I would click pictures of many scenes such as weather, sunsets, and sunrises.'

'"I have a childhood dreams" mixes present tense with plural; use singular "dream" for "a childhood dream." "I have to clicking" is incorrect: use "I would click" or "I wanted to click." "a many views" should be "many scenes" or "many views." List items need plural forms and consistent nouns. Suggestion: use "dream" and correct verb form and plural nouns.'

× 'I like rural area because there is a blaze life and there is a so much words that their sounds are like in the morning time and evening time.'

✓ 'I like rural areas because there is a calm life and there are so many sounds, especially in the morning and evening.'

'"rural area" should be plural "rural areas" to match general preference. "there is a blaze life" is unclear; likely intended "calm life." "there is a so much words" mixes singular verb with plural noun; use "there are so many sounds." Time expressions should be "in the morning and in the evening." Suggestion: use plural forms for general statements and match verbs to plural nouns.'

× 'Also they they speaking they are a language.'

✓ 'Also they speak their own language.'

'"they they speaking" duplicates and uses wrong verb form; use "they speak." "they are a language" is incorrect; people do not 'are a language'—use "their own language." Suggestion: remove duplicated words and use correct verb form with appropriate noun.'

× 'I love this and their urban areas I don't like because there is a sound of vehicles so much loudly.'

✓ 'I love that, and I do not like urban areas because vehicle noise is very loud.'

'"their urban areas" is wrong possessive; use "urban areas." "there is a sound of vehicles so much loudly" is ungrammatical: use "vehicle noise is very loud." Place adverb "very" before adjective "loud." Suggestion: use clear noun phrases and correct adverb placement.'

× 'I love my country view also and I love other country view also because in our country we see all areas that we are daily life seeing and other country we have a different area views we have to visit there and I have to click their photos because they make us a membrane in their all life.'

✓ 'I love the views in my country and I also love views from other countries because in our country we see the places we visit every day, while other countries have different views that I want to visit and photograph because they become lasting memories.'

'"my country view" should be "the views in my country" and similarly "other country view" → "views from other countries." "we see all areas that we are daily life seeing" is awkward; use "the places we visit every day." "we have a different area views" → "other countries have different views." "I have to click their photos" → "I want to photograph them." "they make us a membrane in their all life" is incorrect metaphor; use "they become lasting memories." Suggestion: use natural collocations (views, photograph, memories) and correct tense/word choice.'

× 'We love both of these countries.'

✓ 'We love both of these countries.'

'This sentence is grammatically acceptable, but consider simpler phrasing: "We love both countries." No subject-verb agreement error here; suggestion: shorten for naturalness.'