Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer clearer and more natural by starting with a direct topic sentence, limiting to 2–3 supporting sentences, using linking words, and being specific about what attracts you. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g. “make me more attractive” is incorrect in this context).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I love capturing sunrises and sunsets and scenes of rural farms because the light and textures there are very striking. Also, I often try different angles to highlight details like patterns in fields or the silhouettes of trees.

Sugerencia: Respond with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Avoid vague references to “work” without context and correct grammar (plural/singular, tenses).

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because cities offer more variety and activity. For instance, there are interesting street scenes, illuminated buildings at night, and public events, which give me more photography opportunities than quieter rural areas.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct statement of preference, then explain specifically why with examples and linking words. Avoid repetition and informal phrasing like “more more” and improve grammar (plural/singular, articles).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new landscapes and cultural scenes. For example, I enjoy seeing different architectural styles, coastal scenery I don’t have at home, and local markets, which inspire fresh photographic ideas.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views like sunset, sunrise etcetera, the agriculture farm.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views like sunsets, sunrises, and agricultural farms.

Use plural nouns for general activities (sunsets, sunrises, farms). 'Agriculture farm' is incorrect collocation; use 'agricultural farm' or simply 'farms'. Also include commas and conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when referring to types of views generally and choose correct adjective-noun combinations.

× I also like to take pictures of these in village life that attract me more and different angles of pictures make me more attractive.

✓ I also like taking pictures of village life because it attracts me, and different angles make the photos more interesting.

Incorrect preposition 'in village life' can be rephrased as 'pictures of village life'. 'Attract me more' should be 'it attracts me' to refer to village life. 'Make me more attractive' is likely intended to describe photos, so 'make the photos more interesting' is clearer. Avoid awkward phrasing. Suggestion: Keep subject clear and ensure verbs refer to the correct subject; simplify clauses.

× I prefer urban area because there are a lot of work.

✓ I prefer urban areas because there is a lot of work.

Use plural 'urban areas' when speaking generally. 'Work' is uncountable, so use 'there is a lot of work' not 'a lot of work' with plural verb form. Subject-verb agreement with 'there is' for uncountable noun. Suggestion: Use plural for general locations and remember countable vs uncountable nouns.

× We work at morning or night.

✓ We work in the morning or at night.

Use correct time prepositions: 'in the morning' and 'at night'. Also 'or' is fine for alternatives. Use articles with parts of the day. Suggestion: Learn standard preposition-noun collocations for times of day.

× In a rural area, we cannot find more opportunities.

✓ In rural areas, we cannot find many opportunities.

Use plural 'rural areas' for general statement. 'More opportunities' is unclear; 'many opportunities' correctly expresses scarcity. 'Cannot find' is acceptable but 'find many' is more natural. Suggestion: Use appropriate quantifiers ('many' for countable plural nouns) and pluralize general locations.

× I prefer viewing other country because in other country we see different kinds of views.

✓ I prefer visiting other countries because in other countries we see different kinds of views.

Use 'visiting' or 'going to' rather than 'viewing' for traveling. Use plural 'countries' for general preference and 'in other countries' with plural and article omitted. Ensure consistency. Suggestion: Use correct verb for travel and pluralize when speaking generally.

× In our country we get bored to see daily basis view, in foreign country we explore more more viewable things.

✓ In our country we get bored of seeing the same daily views; in foreign countries we discover many more interesting sights.

Use 'bored of seeing' or 'bored with' rather than 'bored to see'. 'Daily basis view' is ungrammatical; 'the same daily views' is natural. 'Foreign country' should be plural 'foreign countries'. Avoid repeating 'more more'; use 'many more interesting sights'. Suggestion: Use natural collocations ('bored of', 'daily views', 'interesting sights') and avoid repetition; pluralize when generalizing.