Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy (e.g., “for my memories” and “I travel a lot” can be combined). Also correct verb forms and articles.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I travel often, so I take photos to remember places I visit, and I especially like capturing landscapes because they show local character and atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and correct grammar. Use linking words to explain reasons and give specific details. Avoid fillers like “umm” and fix tenses and pronouns (e.g., “I prefer rural areas because I was born in a village”).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas. Since I was born in a village, rural scenes remind me of my childhood and family — for example, visiting my grandparents’ house and the quiet fields makes me feel nostalgic and relaxed.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and expand with specific contrasts or reasons using linking words. Avoid repeating the same adjective (“beautiful”) and give concrete examples of places or sights to strengthen your response.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country, Ukraine, because I know it well and appreciate its variety. For instance, I love the peaceful countryside villages and also the modern skyline of Kyiv, so I can enjoy both historic charm and contemporary architecture.

× Hello yes I like to take picture of different views because it very beautiful and I travel a lot so for my memories I like to take pictures for different views.

✓ Hello. Yes, I like to take pictures of different views because they are very beautiful, and I travel a lot, so for my memories I like to take pictures of different views.

Errors: 'take picture' should be plural 'take pictures' (noun plural). 'it very beautiful' should be 'they are very beautiful' because 'views' is plural and requires plural pronoun and verb (subject-verb agreement). Also add punctuation and a conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: Use plural nouns with plural verbs and pronouns, and include the verb 'are' after pronouns (they are). Use commas or periods to separate clauses.

× I prefer a rural areas because I was born in the village and it's umm makes me feel that I begged my childhood when was my grandma and grandfather lives.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I was born in a village, and it makes me feel like I lived my childhood with my grandmother and grandfather.

Errors: 'a rural areas' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'areas' — remove 'a' or use singular 'a rural area'. 'the village' can be 'a village' when speaking generally. 'it's umm makes me feel that I begged my childhood' is incorrect: 'it makes me feel like I lived my childhood' conveys intended meaning. 'was my grandma and grandfather lives' is ungrammatical; correct is 'with my grandmother and grandfather' and use past tense 'lived' for the experience. Suggestion: Match articles to noun number, use 'like' to compare feelings, and use correct past tense verbs and prepositions such as 'with'.

× I prefer views in my own country because my country is Ukraine. It's such a beautiful country with great views and nice villages and very modern cities.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because my country is Ukraine. It is such a beautiful country with great views, charming villages, and very modern cities.

Issue: 'It's' is acceptable contraction, but improve clarity by avoiding repeated 'and' and adjusting adjectives. 'nice villages' is informal; 'charming villages' is more natural. Ensure parallel structure in the list: 'great views, charming villages, and very modern cities.' Suggestion: Use parallel adjective phrases and maintain consistent style; no pronoun error per se, but this improves grammar and register.