Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammatical accuracy and fluency: use correct verb forms and simpler sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Reduce hesitations and filler words (uh, umm). Be concise and natural (max 4–5 sentences).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I like to photograph new places so I can remember them later, and I often share the best shots on social media. For example, when I visit a mountain village I take pictures of the landscape and local houses so I can look back on the trip.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and support it with clear reasons and a short example. Fix grammar (use 'rural areas', correct tense, subject-verb agreement). Avoid trailing off and fillers. Use a linking word like 'because' or 'however' correctly to contrast. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: It depends on my mood, but generally I prefer rural areas. I find the countryside more peaceful because there is less noise and cleaner air. However, I sometimes enjoy city views when I want lively scenes or architectural photos.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly: say you like both and give specific reasons. Correct grammar (plural/singular, verb forms) and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to structure reasons. Provide a brief example to illustrate preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in both my country and abroad. In my country there are many famous tourist spots with beautiful landscapes, so I enjoy photographing them. I also like visiting other countries because I can discover new scenery and cultures I have never seen before.

× I personally interested in capturing a photo when I was receiving a new places so I can put those footprints as the memorial, uh, for me when I, umm, getting older and I can show uh, this on the social.

✓ I am personally interested in capturing photos when I visit new places so I can keep those footprints as memories for myself when I get older, and I can show them on social media.

Error type: missing auxiliary verb and wrong verb forms (be + adjective), incorrect tense and verb forms, singular/plural and article usage. Use 'am interested' (present state requires be + adjective), 'capture photos' (plural), 'when I visit' (simple present for habitual actions), 'visit' not 'receiving', 'new places' (plural without article), 'keep ... as memories' (more natural than 'put those footprints as the memorial'), 'when I get older' (simple present for future reference in time clause), 'show them on social media' (use pronoun 'them' and correct term 'social media'). Suggestion: include correct auxiliary verbs, use correct verb forms for habitual/general actions, and match singular/plural nouns and natural collocations.

× It depends on my mood as well. So actually I would say that for now on I really can say that I prefer rural area. I don't like umm the metropolitan area because it's make me so annoyed umm, however umm when I getting.

✓ It depends on my mood as well. Actually, I would say that for now I prefer rural areas. I don't like metropolitan areas because they make me feel annoyed; however, when I am getting (tired/bored) I might prefer the city.

Error type: present tense and subject-verb agreement, plus singular/plural. Use simple present 'I prefer' for habits. Use plural 'rural areas' and 'metropolitan areas' or add articles. 'It makes me' should be 'they make me' to agree with plural subject. 'Make me so annoyed' is awkward; 'make me feel annoyed' is natural. The final clause was incomplete: 'when I getting' needs 'when I am getting' plus a complement (e.g., tired or bored). Suggestion: ensure correct present tense forms, match subjects and verbs, use plural nouns or correct articles, and complete clauses with appropriate complements.

× I prefer both actually, uh, either in my countries or in other nations, because in my country we also have a lot of the tourist sport that we can visit it and it's really famous in the world. And for the new countries, I can say that I never been there before. So if you is the best.

✓ I prefer both, actually, either in my country or in other countries, because in my country we also have many tourist spots that we can visit and they are really famous around the world. For new countries, I can say that I have never been there before, so they are the best to visit.

Error type: pronoun and auxiliary misuse, plus singular/plural and past participle. Use 'my country' (singular) or 'my countries' only if you mean multiple; here 'my country' fits. Use 'other countries' (plural). 'A lot of the tourist sport' should be 'many tourist spots' (plural noun and quantifier). Do not use 'visit it' after 'spots' — use 'visit' without 'it' or use 'them'. 'It's really famous' should be 'they are really famous' to agree with plural 'spots'. 'I never been' is missing auxiliary 'have' for present perfect: 'I have never been there before.' 'So if you is the best' is unclear; corrected to 'so they are the best to visit.' Suggestion: use correct pronouns and auxiliaries, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use proper quantifiers and plural forms.