Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammatical accuracy, reduce fillers and repetition, and make sentences more concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct vocabulary (e.g., "lighting" not "lightning") and phrasing ("helps me remember" instead of "keep the things remember").

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking photos when I travel. For example, I often photograph landscapes from different angles and capture interesting lighting to highlight textures. This helps me remember the atmosphere of each place.

Sugerencia: Make the answer more concise and correct repetition. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific reason and an example, linked by a connector. Avoid repeating phrases like "there are there is."

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and less crowded. For instance, I enjoy photographing quiet country roads and fields where I can focus on natural details without distractions.

Sugerencia: Clarify meaning and avoid informal filler and vague phrases. Use a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give two specific examples to support it, linked with conjunctions. Replace "Seaview" with "coasts" or "sea views" and avoid "using my country."

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers diverse landscapes. For example, we have mountains for hiking and scenic coastlines for sea views, so I rarely feel the need to travel abroad for different scenery.

× I like taking pictures whenever I travel.

✓ I like taking pictures whenever I travel.

No change needed; sentence is correct. The verb 'taking' is correctly used as a present participle after 'like'.

× Like I take pictures of different beautiful sceneries from different angles and and lightning effects.

✓ I take pictures of different beautiful scenes from different angles and lighting effects.

The sentence had informal filler 'Like' at the start and a repetition 'and and'. 'Sceneries' is usually uncountable or replaced by 'scenes'. 'Lightning' (electrical discharge) is incorrect; 'lighting' (light effects) is intended. Suggest starting sentences directly and avoiding filler words and repetitions.

× It helps me to keep the things remember.

✓ It helps me to remember things.

The original uses an incorrect structure 'keep the things remember'. The correct verb phrase is 'helps me to remember' or simply 'helps me remember'. Place the verb 'remember' directly after 'helps me to' and put the object 'things' after the verb.

× Honestly I love rural areas because they are so peaceful and there are there is no hustle and rush there so I prefer more views in rural areas.

✓ Honestly, I love rural areas because they are so peaceful and there is no hustle and bustle there, so I prefer views in rural areas.

The sentence contains redundant phrases 'there are there is' and an incorrect collocation 'hustle and rush'; the common phrase is 'hustle and bustle'. Also 'prefer more views' is awkward; 'prefer views' or 'prefer to view rural areas' is better. Add commas for clarity and remove redundancy.

× My country has all types of views, like it has mountains, deserts, uh, rivers, Seaview and all.

✓ My country has all types of scenery: it has mountains, deserts, rivers, sea views, and more.

Use 'scenery' rather than 'views' for natural features. 'Seaview' should be two words 'sea views' or 'seaviews' (less common). 'Uh' is filler and should be removed in formal responses. Replace 'and all' with 'and more' for clarity. Use a colon to introduce the list and commas appropriately.

× You know every natural view is available in my country.

✓ You know, every type of natural scenery is available in my country.

'Every natural view is available' is awkward; 'every type of natural scenery' is clearer. Add a comma after 'You know' for natural speech rhythm.

× Why would I prefer any other country? I just love using my country.

✓ Why would I prefer any other country? I just love my country.

'Using my country' is incorrect and unnatural in this context; the intended meaning is 'I love my country'. Remove 'using' to correct the meaning.