Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and repetition, and structure your answer with one clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, "because" and "so") and avoid filler sounds like "uh". Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they capture special moments and scenery. For example, when I see a colorful sunrise or an interesting street scene, I take a picture and later share it with my friends on social media. This helps me remember the place and show others what I experienced.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer then support it with two specific reasons using linking words like "because" and "for example". Avoid repeating phrases and reduce hesitations. Be more precise in vocabulary (e.g., "city life" vs "rural landscapes").

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they show natural landscapes and a slower way of life. For example, in the countryside I can photograph golden sunsets and daily scenes of local people working, which I find more peaceful than busy city streets.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear position (e.g., "I enjoy views from both my country and abroad"), then give specific supporting details and an example. Avoid unfinished sentences and vague phrasing. Use linking words like "also" and "for instance" to connect ideas coherently.

Ejemplo: I enjoy views both in my country and abroad because each place offers different scenery. For instance, at home I love the nearby mountains and forests, while when I travel to places like Thailand or Malaysia I enjoy tropical beaches and vibrant city views. These differences make traveling rewarding.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because when, whenever I go out, uh, and if I see something, uh, beautiful, which, which attract my, attract me, I will take a picture and maybe I will post in social media or I will show my friends or family and I think, uh, picture makes things beautiful and I can.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because whenever I go out and see something beautiful that attracts me, I will take a picture. Maybe I will post it on social media or show it to my friends or family, and I think pictures make things look beautiful.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect verb forms: 'which attract my, attract me' uses base verb 'attract' but needs present participle or relative clause with third-person singular agreement. 'Picture makes things beautiful' should be plural 'pictures make things look beautiful'. Also omitted object pronouns and prepositions: 'post in social media' should be 'post it on social media', 'show my friends' should be 'show it to my friends'. Suggestions: simplify the sentence into shorter clauses, use correct subject-verb agreement, use present participle or relative clause correctly, include necessary pronouns and prepositions.

× I would say I mostly prefer rural views from rural area because I live in a urban city so there is nothing much because it's a city life.

✓ I would say I mostly prefer rural views from rural areas because I live in an urban city, so there is not much to see in city life.

The original has singular/plural mismatch: 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match 'views', and 'a urban city' is incorrect article use before a vowel sound; 'an urban city' is correct. Also 'there is nothing much' is colloquial and ungrammatical; use 'there is not much to see'. Suggestions: match singular/plural forms, use correct articles ('an'), and use clear phrasing for 'not much to see'.

× But in rural area I can see the nature like uh, uh, how people are living their life or the sunset and sunrises, uh.

✓ But in rural areas I can see nature, like how people live their lives, and the sunsets and sunrises.

Article and noun form errors: 'in rural area' should be 'in rural areas' or 'in the countryside'. 'See the nature' should be 'see nature' without 'the'. 'How people are living their life' is awkward; correct is 'how people live their lives'. 'The sunset and sunrises' mixes singular and plural; use 'the sunsets and sunrises' or 'sunset and sunrise'. Suggestions: use 'the countryside' or plural 'rural areas', remove unnecessary articles before uncountable nouns, and make verb and noun forms consistent.

× I prefer a views from anywhere or from the world, my country or have so many beautiful location like sea, beach, mountains and forests and all.

✓ I prefer views from anywhere in the world. My country also has many beautiful locations, such as the sea, beaches, mountains, and forests.

Problems include incorrect article and plural forms: 'a views' should be 'views' (no article) or 'a view' (singular). 'from the world' should be 'in the world'. 'have so many beautiful location' should be 'has many beautiful locations' to agree with 'my country' (singular subject requires 'has' and plural 'locations'). Also list items need correct plural forms ('beach' -> 'beaches') and connectors ('such as'). Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement, use plural forms for countable nouns, and choose correct prepositions ('in the world').

× But also I travel abroad and I like the views from Thailand, Malaysia and Singapore so there is no.

✓ I also travel abroad, and I like the views in Thailand, Malaysia, and Singapore.

The original ends with an incomplete clause 'so there is no', which is sentence-fragment and unclear. Use a complete structure: 'I also travel abroad, and I like the views in Thailand, Malaysia, and Singapore.' Remove the unfinished phrase. Suggestions: avoid sentence fragments by completing clauses, and use parallel prepositions ('in Thailand') for countries.