Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar, use a clear topic sentence, link ideas, and avoid repetition. Aim for 2–4 sentences: state you like taking photos, give a specific reason, and one short example. Also fix tense and article errors and remove filler words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve travel memories. For example, when I visited a coastal town last year, I photographed the sunset so I could remember the colours and mood. This way, I can revisit those moments in my gallery.

Sugerencia: Give a direct response first (e.g. ‘It depends’ is fine) then explain with coherent linking words and specific examples. Correct grammar (singular/plural, articles) and shorten sentences to avoid redundancy. Use linking words like 'however' or 'for example'.

Ejemplo: It depends on the location. For example, I enjoy urban views when a city has impressive skyscrapers like New York, but I prefer rural views for natural scenery such as mountains or quiet beaches. Ultimately, I choose based on what the place is famous for.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid hesitation sounds. Start with a clear statement about your current experience, then explain your preference and give a concise reason or example. Fix grammar (present perfect/ past participle, articles) and remove filler words like 'uh'.

Ejemplo: I haven't traveled abroad yet, so I currently prefer views in my own country. I have visited many beaches and mountains in the Philippines, and I hope to travel internationally in the future to compare landscapes and cultural differences.

× Yes, I love taking pictures, especially when I travel because I like to keep the memories in my gallery and look at look back to the time that I went to that place by taking pictures of it and I appreciate the view more because it's not every day that you see the.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures, especially when I travel, because I like to keep the memories in my gallery and look back at the times I went to those places by taking pictures of them, and I appreciate the view more because it's not every day that you see it.

Errors include redundant words ('look at look back'), incorrect preposition placement ('look back at' is correct), incorrect time/place references ('the time that I went to that place' -> 'the times I went to those places'), and pronoun agreement ('it' -> 'them' for plural places). Use of present participle 'taking pictures of it' is acceptable but replaced with 'them' to match plural. Suggestion: remove redundancy, use correct prepositions ('look back at'), match pronouns to their antecedents, and use parallel structure with commas for clarity.

× It depends actually because someplace are known for its highest towers, for example in the city of New York, and some places are like in the rural area are known for its mountains or in the beach area.

✓ It depends, actually, because some places are known for their tall towers, for example the city of New York, and some places in rural areas are known for their mountains or beaches.

Errors: 'someplace are' mixes singular and plural; 'someplace' should be 'some places'. 'its highest towers' mismatches plural 'places' with singular possessive; use 'their'. 'in the rural area are known' is awkward; use 'in rural areas are known'. 'in the beach area' should be 'beaches'. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb number agree, use plural forms consistently, and choose natural collocations ('tall towers', 'beaches').

× So it depends on what the place is known for.

✓ So it depends on what a place is known for.

Original sentence is understandable but using 'the place' implies a specific place; in general statements use 'a place'. Suggestion: use indefinite article for generalization and keep sentence concise.

× In my case, I haven't traveled abroad internationally, so I would say that my goal now is to, uh, travel abroad since I already travel locally and seen the mountains and beaches in the Philippines, and I would like to compare it with the other, uh, international please.

✓ In my case, I haven't traveled internationally, so my goal now is to travel abroad since I have already traveled locally and seen the mountains and beaches in the Philippines, and I would like to compare them with those in other countries.

Errors: redundant 'abroad internationally' (both mean same); inconsistent tense and missing auxiliary in 'seen' (should be 'have seen' or 'seen' with 'have'); 'travel' should be past participle 'traveled' after 'have already'; pronoun agreement: 'it' is incorrect for plural 'mountains and beaches' -> 'them'; 'the other, uh, international please' is garbled; use 'those in other countries'. Suggestion: avoid redundancy, use present perfect for experiences ('have traveled', 'have seen'), and match pronouns and nouns in number.