Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and article use, and avoid repeating phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I often take photos to preserve memories because when I look at them later I can recall exactly how I felt. For example, a picture of a sunset at the beach reminds me of the warm breeze and a peaceful evening.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer, correct grammar, and use linking words to add one or two specific reasons. Avoid filler sounds and repeated words. Use singular/plural and collocations correctly (e.g. 'feel connected to nature').

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views. Because I feel connected to nature there, I find sights like rolling fields and open skies very calming. For example, seeing clouds and tall grass helps me relax after a busy week in the city.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use clearer vocabulary and grammar. Explain briefly why with a specific example. Use linking words like 'however' or 'also' to compare both options.

Ejemplo: I enjoy views both at home and abroad. Home views feel familiar and comforting, whereas views in other countries offer new scenery and cultural experiences. For instance, I love seeing local markets at home but I also enjoy coastal landscapes when I travel abroad.

× Yes I do because I feel like every time when I took the pictures it will keep the memory and when I want to look back I remember exactly how I feel at that moment.

✓ Yes, I do because I feel like every time I take pictures it keeps the memory, and when I look back I can remember exactly how I felt at that moment.

The sentence mixes past and present incorrectly. Use present simple 'take' and 'keeps' for habitual actions, and use past 'felt' to refer to the earlier moment. Also use modal 'can' for ability to remember. Remove unnecessary 'when' after 'every time'. Improve word order and punctuation for clarity.

× So this is a way for me to keep all my memories.

✓ So this is a way for me to keep my memories.

The word 'all' is unnecessary and sounds unnatural here. 'My memories' is sufficient. Also add a comma before 'So' if needed in context.

× MMM, I am the person who prefer the big nature more so I prefer the rural areas.

✓ MMM, I am the kind of person who prefers nature more, so I prefer rural areas.

Pronoun and noun choice: 'the person who prefer' should be 'the kind of person who prefers' to match singular subject with third-person singular verb 'prefers'. 'Big nature' is unnatural; use 'nature' or 'the countryside'. Remove extra articles before plural 'rural areas'.

× I feel like every time when I stay in the rural areas, I feel connect with the natures, I feel every single beautiful poets like the grass or the cloud and I feel myself calm calm.

✓ I feel that every time I stay in rural areas, I feel connected with nature; I notice little beautiful things like the grass or the clouds, and I feel very calm.

Use present simple for habitual actions: 'stay'. Correct adjective/verb form 'feel connect' -> 'feel connected'. 'Natures' should be uncountable 'nature'. 'Poets' is incorrect word; use 'little things' or 'features'. 'Cloud' should be plural 'clouds'. Repetition 'calm calm' replaced with 'very calm'. Punctuation improved.

× I think every views have their own unit so even my countries or other countries, this place always bring their own vibe.

✓ I think every view has its own character, so whether in my country or other countries, each place always brings its own vibe.

Subject-verb agreement: 'every views' should be singular 'every view' with singular verb 'has'. 'Their' replaced by singular possessive 'its'. 'Countries' and possessive forms were misused: 'my countries' incorrect — likely 'my country'. Use 'brings' to agree with 'each place'. 'Unit' is wrong word choice; 'character' fits better.

× So this is also the new things that I can watch out or experience about.

✓ So this is also something new that I can discover or experience.

Awkward structure and incorrect preposition 'watch out or experience about'. Use 'something new' (singular) and verbs 'discover' or 'experience' without a trailing preposition. Simplify sentence for clarity.