Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, avoid fillers (uh, um), use correct grammar and a clear topic sentence, and provide one or two specific examples. Keep answer under 5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I travel I often photograph mountain landscapes and beaches because I like capturing wide skies and natural colors. I also try to include a person or an object in the foreground to show scale, which makes the pictures more interesting.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear preference or balanced view, correct article use and phrasing, and provide a reason with a linking word (e.g., however, because). Avoid confusing phrases and unnecessary repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they feel peaceful and offer natural scenery like coasts and mountains. However, I also appreciate urban views for their architecture and lively streets, so I enjoy photographing both when I travel.

Sugerencia: State your situation clearly, avoid contradictions and unclear words, use correct tense and vocabulary (e.g., ‘I haven’t traveled abroad’), and give a reason and an example. Keep it simple and coherent.

Ejemplo: I haven't traveled to other countries, so I mostly enjoy views from my own country because I know the places well. However, I often watch videos of foreign landscapes online and I admire their different architecture and scenery, which inspires me to travel in the future.

× Yes uh, every time when I go out, I like to take pictures with the, of the views.

✓ Yes, every time I go out, I like to take pictures of the views.

The original has redundant words and awkward preposition 'with the, of the'. Remove filler and use the correct preposition 'of' with 'pictures' to indicate what is photographed. Also omit 'when' after 'every time' for concise present habitual tense.

× Sometimes I uh, like I, I am a traveler, uh, I love to travel and uh, whenever I go to travel, I uh, usually takes the picture of the views of like different places and also it's, it's kind of mountain beach and skies, so.

✓ Sometimes I am a traveler; I love to travel and whenever I travel, I usually take pictures of views of different places, such as mountains, beaches, and skies.

Multiple problems: subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. 'I usually takes' is incorrect; use 'I usually take'. 'Whenever I go to travel' is unnatural; use 'whenever I travel'. Also restructure the sentence to remove fillers and list examples properly. Maintain simple present for habitual actions.

× Yes, as I live in a urban area and most of the time I see the views of urban areas so by default I need to or I have to see the urban areas views.

✓ Yes, as I live in an urban area and most of the time I see urban views, so by default I see views of urban areas.

Use the indefinite article 'an' before a vowel sound ('urban'). 'Urban areas views' is awkward; 'urban views' or 'views of urban areas' is correct. Remove unnecessary modal phrasing 'I need to or I have to' which is incorrect in this context and disrupts meaning.

× But as I said that I'm a traveler so I'll have to see the rural areas view in law and this will be on top of the sea.

✓ But as I said, since I'm a traveler I also see rural views, often near the sea.

Original has unclear phrase 'view in law' (likely incorrect word) and awkward future modal 'I'll have to see'. Use present simple 'I also see' for habitual actions. Clarify 'on top of the sea' to 'near the sea' for natural English. Improve sentence flow and remove incorrect words.

× I didn't travel here in in another countries other than my country so I have to see the my country videos.

✓ I haven't traveled to other countries, so I have to visit places in my own country.

Use present perfect 'haven't traveled' to indicate experience up to now. 'Didn't travel here in in another countries' is ungrammatical. 'See the my country videos' is incorrect; if meaning visiting, use 'visit places in my own country'. Ensure article usage 'my own country'.

× But I have seen a lot of videos where videos of other countries so I love to see that.

✓ But I have seen a lot of videos of other countries, so I love watching them.

Original repeats 'videos' and uses 'that' awkwardly. Use 'videos of other countries' and the pronoun 'them' to refer back to 'videos'. Use 'watching' for consuming videos. Keep present perfect for experience.

× But until now I love to see the SC mic address too.

✓ Until now, I have also enjoyed seeing scenic places.

The phrase 'SC mic address' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation; interpret as 'scenic' or 'scenic places'. Use present perfect 'have enjoyed' or simple present 'I also love' depending on meaning. Clarify vocabulary and correct word choice to 'scenic'.

× I uh, usually takes the picture of the views of like different places

✓ I usually take pictures of views of different places

'Takes' does not agree with subject 'I'; use 'take'. Also pluralize 'pictures' for natural collocation with 'views'. Maintain simple present for habitual action.