Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitation and repetition, give a clear topic sentence then one supporting detail. Use concise phrasing and correct small grammatical errors (e.g., 'taking pictures of different views' and 'it helps me remember places'). Aim for 2–3 sentences and avoid filler sounds.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel. It helps me remember places and capture special moments, so I often take photos of landscapes and city scenes.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and correct grammar (say 'I prefer rural areas' and 'they have beautiful scenery'). Use one reason with a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so') and avoid repeating phrases. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they have beautiful scenery, like hills and open fields. Therefore, I like taking photos there since the peaceful landscapes refresh my mind.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence (e.g., 'I prefer views in my own country') and provide specific examples without redundancy. Correct grammar: 'there are many beautiful places such as large hills and beaches.' Finish your thought and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because there are many beautiful places, such as large hills and sandy beaches. Whenever I visit them, I enjoy taking photos of the sea and the surrounding landscape.

× Yes, definitely I like I like taking pictures on in different views, especially when I when I I travel.

✓ Yes, definitely I like taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel.

The phrase 'taking pictures on in different views' uses incorrect prepositions and extra words; 'taking pictures of different views' is the correct collocation. Also remove repeated words ('I like I like', 'when I when I I') which are disfluencies rather than grammatical forms. Use 'when I travel' for a simple present habitual action. Suggestion: say 'I like taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel.'

× When I travel any place it helps me to it helps me to to remember the remember the places.

✓ When I travel to any place, it helps me to remember the places.

The original has repetitions and redundant infinitive markers ('helps me to it helps me to to') and repeated words. Use a single clear clause: 'When I travel to any place' (preposition 'to' is appropriate for movement to a place) and 'it helps me to remember the places.' Remove duplicates and extra words. Suggestion: practice concise sentences without repetition.

× Yeah, I prefer other rural areas because they have many beautiful scenery.

✓ Yeah, I prefer rural areas because they have a lot of beautiful scenery.

'Many' is used with countable nouns; 'scenery' is an uncountable noun, so 'a lot of' or 'much' is appropriate. Also 'other' is unnecessary if contrasting urban and rural; simply 'rural areas' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'a lot of beautiful scenery' or 'much beautiful scenery' for uncountable nouns.

× Whenever I go go outside, go go outside I, I, I like to take photos with these views and it helps me to refresh our mind, refresh my mind and.

✓ Whenever I go outside, I like to take photos of these views, and it helps me to refresh my mind.

Remove repeated words. Use 'take photos of' rather than 'with these views' to indicate the subject of the photos. 'Refresh our mind' mixes pronouns; use 'my mind' to match the speaker. End the sentence properly. Suggestion: say 'Whenever I go outside, I like to take photos of these views, and it helps me refresh my mind.'

× Yeah, I always prefer in my own country 'cause in my country there have many beautiful scenery such as here big hills, sea, beach, sea beach and beautiful scenery and so on etc.

✓ Yeah, I always prefer my own country because there is a lot of beautiful scenery, such as big hills and beaches.

Don't use 'prefer in my own country'—use 'prefer my own country' or 'prefer staying in my own country.' 'There have' is incorrect; use 'there is' for uncountable 'scenery.' 'Many' is wrong with 'scenery' (uncountable). 'Sea beach' is redundant; 'beaches' or 'the sea and beaches' is better. Remove 'and so on etc.' which is repetitive. Suggestion: simplify to 'there is a lot of beautiful scenery, such as big hills and beaches.'

× Whenever I go there, they.

✓ Whenever I go there, I enjoy the scenery.

The original is an incomplete sentence ending with 'they.' It lacks a clear subject-verb-object and does not express a full idea. Replace with a complete clause that conveys the intended meaning, e.g., 'I enjoy the scenery' or 'I take many photos.' Suggestion: always ensure sentences have a subject and verb and complete thought.