Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời tự nhiên và liên quan, nhưng cần rút ngắn và tránh lặp từ (ví dụ “always” lặp 2 lần). Thêm một câu chi tiết cụ thể để làm phong phú nội dung (ví dụ nơi hoặc loại cảnh bạn thích chụp). Giữ tối đa 4-5 câu, dùng từ nối nếu mở rộng ý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I find photography a great way to preserve memories, so I often photograph landscapes and street scenes. For example, I like taking photos of sunrise over the river because of the colours and reflections.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có ý rõ nhưng cấu trúc lủng củng, sử dụng từ không chính xác và lặp (ví dụ “like” dùng thừa, “attract more attention of mine” không tự nhiên). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích lý do cụ thể với từ nối (because/while), và tránh từ nói lóng. Giữ 2–3 câu súc tích.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views. Because I live in a city, rural landscapes feel more refreshing and varied, especially fields and mountains. In contrast, urban scenes are familiar to me and less surprising.

Sugerencia: Ý tưởng tốt và có ví dụ, nhưng có lỗi phát âm/viết (questions, landcapes, scene) và từ nối chưa mạch lạc. Tránh tiếng lắp (uh, wow) trong bài thi, sửa ngữ pháp (plural/singular) và nối ý bằng từ như However/Also, rồi đưa ví dụ cụ thể về một địa điểm trong/ngoài nước để tăng thuyết phục.

Ejemplo: That's hard to say because I love both. My country has diverse scenery, from dramatic mountains to peaceful coastal towns, and I'm proud of that. However, I also enjoy travelling abroad to experience different cultures and landscapes, such as visiting the Alps in Switzerland.

× I always consider photography a great way to capture memorable moments, so whenever I see stunning scenery or interesting details, I always take a lot of pictures.

✓ I always consider photography a great way to capture memorable moments, so whenever I see stunning scenery or interesting details, I take a lot of pictures.

The original sentence uses 'always' twice which is stylistically redundant but not strictly grammatical; corrected version removes the second 'always' to improve naturalness and flow. Suggestion: avoid repeating adverbs unnecessarily; place frequency adverbs (like always) once near the main verb for clarity.

× the landscapes of rural areas attract more attention of mine because I'm living in cities.

✓ the landscapes of rural areas attract more of my attention because I live in the city.

Use 'attract more of my attention' or 'attract my attention more' instead of 'attract more attention of mine'. Also 'I'm living in cities' is unnatural when referring to residing in an urban area generally; use 'I live in the city' or 'I live in a city'. Suggestion: use 'of my' after 'more' for possession and prefer simple present 'I live' for general facts.

× I always see like a lot of different views in urban areas, so I have the tendency to admire.

✓ I see a lot of different views in urban areas, so I tend to admire them less.

Remove filler 'like' in formal speech. 'Have the tendency to' is wordy; 'tend to' is more natural. Also the original 'admire' needs an object; add 'them' or rephrase to 'admire them less' to convey comparison with rural landscapes. Suggestion: use concise verbs and include objects for transitive verbs.

× Wow, that's a very difficult questions because I like both.

✓ Wow, that's a very difficult question because I like both.

Mismatch between singular 'a' and plural 'questions'. Use singular 'question'. Suggestion: ensure determiners (a/an) match noun number.

× the landcapes in my country are various and stunning, from dramatic mountainous areas to tranquil coastal towns.

✓ the landscapes in my country are varied and stunning, from dramatic mountainous areas to tranquil coastal towns.

Typo 'landcapes' corrected to 'landscapes'. 'Various' is grammatically acceptable but 'varied' better collocates with 'landscapes'. Suggestion: choose adjectives that commonly collocate with the noun and check spelling.

× I'm very proud of that.

✓ I'm very proud of them.

Refers back to 'landscapes', a plural noun, so pronoun should be plural 'them' not 'that' which refers to a singular idea. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with the noun they replace.

× But at the same time, I really enjoy visiting other countries to admire different scene.

✓ But at the same time, I really enjoy visiting other countries to admire different scenery.

Use the noun 'scenery' (uncountable) rather than singular 'scene'. 'Different scenery' correctly expresses varied landscapes in other countries. Suggestion: use appropriate uncountable/collective nouns like 'scenery' for landscapes.