Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details. Avoid irrelevant phrases (e.g. “sound of birds” when describing a view) and correct grammar (e.g. use plural/singular consistently). Use linking words for flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often take photos from mountain tops because the wide panoramas and rows of pine trees create dramatic compositions, and I sometimes capture birds in the sky to add life to the scene.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer then support it with clear, specific reasons. Fix grammar (e.g. “I’d prefer urban areas”) and avoid repetition. Use linking words like “because” or “so” correctly and include concrete examples of urban features you like.

Ejemplo: I’d prefer views in urban areas because the architecture and city lights create interesting shapes and contrasts. For instance, I enjoy photographing modern skyscrapers at dusk and bustling streets with neon signs, which make my photos more dynamic.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid filler words like “umm”. Use correct tenses and clearer vocabulary (e.g. “I prefer views in other countries because they have diverse architecture and unique landscapes”). Provide one specific reason and an example to illustrate your preference.

Ejemplo: Although my country has many beautiful landscapes, I prefer views in other countries because their diverse architecture and cultural scenery inspire me. For example, I love photographing historic European streets and colorful markets abroad because they offer textures and details I don’t often see at home.

× For me, I love taking pictures with a different view, which is from a mountain, from a sky with a beautiful sound of birds and also a beautiful series of trees.

✓ For me, I love taking pictures of different views, such as mountains, the sky with the beautiful sound of birds, and rows of trees.

The original uses 'with a different view' which is awkward; 'taking pictures of different views' is natural (correct use of 'of' with 'taking pictures'). 'Which is from a mountain, from a sky...' mixes relative clause incorrectly. Use examples introduced by 'such as' and plural nouns (mountains, rows of trees) to match 'views'. Also 'sound of birds' needs 'the' or 'the beautiful sound' and 'series of trees' is better as 'rows of trees' for natural phrasing.

× For me I'd be prefer more views in urban areas because they have a lot of good sceneries with a with a look and they are so good with my pictures.

✓ For me, I would prefer urban views because they offer many attractive scenes and look good in my pictures.

'I'd be prefer' is incorrect: use 'I would prefer' or 'I'd prefer' (modal verb + base verb). 'Sceneries' is nonstandard; use 'scenes' or 'scenery' (uncountable). Remove redundant 'with a with a look' and simplify to 'look good in my pictures'. This corrects modal verb usage and word choice for natural English.

× For me, my country is having a lot of beautiful views, our scenery in here, but I've been more preferred in other countries because umm they have a lot of aesthetics and more attempting of buildings and sceneries that I can look for.

✓ My country has many beautiful views and scenery, but I have preferred other countries because they have more interesting architecture and attractive landscapes to explore.

'My country is having' is incorrect; stative verbs like 'have' use simple present: 'has'. 'Our scenery in here' is awkward and redundant. 'I've been more preferred in other countries' is passive and wrong; use 'I have preferred other countries' (present perfect active). 'A lot of aesthetics' is vague; 'interesting architecture' fits better. 'More attempting of buildings and sceneries' is ungrammatical; replace with 'attractive landscapes to explore'. This addresses present tense misuse and sentence structure.