Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Trả lời nên tự nhiên, mạch lạc và đầy đủ hơn. Hiện tại câu trả lời ngắt quãng, lặp ý và thiếu liên kết. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại ảnh bạn thích hoặc mục đích chụp) và dùng từ nối để liên kết ý. Ngoài ra tránh các mẩu câu ngắn không hoàn chỉnh như "Easily."

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me capture special moments. For example, I often take landscape photos when I travel and portraits of friends at events. This way I build a diverse photo collection that reminds me of those experiences.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần mạch lạc và tránh câu bị ngắt quãng. Hiện tại có lỗi ngữ pháp (e.g., "its" vs "their"), câu không hoàn chỉnh và thiếu liên kết. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích lý do với ví dụ cụ thể và dùng từ nối như "because", "for example" để làm rõ ý.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more scenic than cities. For example, I love photographing rice terraces and quiet rivers, which show natural beauty and peaceful moods that urban streets usually lack.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Trả lời hiện thiếu tính mạch lạc và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp/vốn từ không chính xác. Tránh tiếng lúng túng ("uh") và các cụm từ không hoàn chỉnh. Nên dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, nêu lý do cụ thể (ví dụ các địa danh, đặc điểm địa lý) và kết luận ngắn gọn. Sử dụng từ vựng chính xác như "coastline", "highlands", "diverse landscapes".

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Vietnam has extremely diverse landscapes. For instance, we have a long coastline with beautiful beaches and dramatic highlands like Sa Pa, so I can find many different scenes to photograph without traveling abroad.

× I like taking pictures of different views, making my storage more various and I can store my moments, my memories. Easily.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views, which makes my collection more varied and lets me store my memories easily.

The original uses 'making' without a clear subject and 'storage more various' is unidiomatic. Use a relative clause 'which makes' to link actions and 'varied' for adjective. Also combine fragments into one sentence and use 'lets me' for ability. Suggestion: Use 'which makes' or 'this makes' to introduce the result, use 'collection' or 'album' instead of 'storage', and place adverb 'easily' after the verb.

× I'm fond of views in rural areas because of its tranquility and. The breathtaking sceneries.

✓ I'm fond of views in rural areas because of their tranquility and the breathtaking scenery.

There is a fragment and pronoun agreement issue: 'its' refers to singular but 'rural areas' is plural, and 'The breathtaking sceneries' is a fragment and 'scenery' is an uncountable noun usually used in singular. Combine into one sentence, use 'their' for plural possessive, and 'scenery' instead of 'sceneries'. Suggestion: Combine fragments and ensure pronoun agrees with plural noun.

× In my opinion, rural areas have the attraction that urban areas.

✓ In my opinion, rural areas have attractions that urban areas do not.

The sentence is incomplete and missing a comparative structure; 'the attraction that urban areas' is ungrammatical. Add 'do not' to complete the comparison and use plural 'attractions' for general sense. Suggestion: Use '...have attractions that urban areas do not' or '...are more attractive than urban areas'.

× I prefer views in my country because Vietnamese terrain is so good that not many countries in the world have.

✓ I prefer views in my country because Vietnam's terrain is so special that not many countries in the world have the same.

The original ends abruptly and misorders phrases. Use possessive 'Vietnam's terrain' and finish the comparative idea with 'have the same' or 'have such terrain'. 'So good that not many' is vague; 'so special that not many' is clearer. Suggestion: Complete the clause by specifying what other countries lack, e.g., 'the same features'.

× But the long coastline and the Highlands, uh, from north to east, I think that Vietnam is the most picture.

✓ With its long coastline and highlands from north to south, I think Vietnam is the most photogenic country.

The phrase is disordered and 'from north to east' is incorrect (coastline runs north to south), 'the most picture' is ungrammatical; use 'photogenic' to mean 'good for pictures' and reorder to 'with its...'. Also remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: Use 'photogenic' and correct geographic phrase to 'from north to south' or simply 'from north to south' if that fits.