Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and be more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Replace fillers (uh, umm) with brief pauses. For example, specify what kinds of natural scenes you like and why.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing natural landscapes. For instance, I love capturing sunrise scenes in the mountains because the light and colors change quickly, which makes each photo unique.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and two concise supporting points using linking words. Avoid long lists and reduce fillers. Be more specific about examples of architecture or cultural scenes.

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing urban views because they offer striking architecture and lively street life. For example, I enjoy shooting modern skyscrapers at sunset and busy market streets where colorful signs and people create dynamic scenes.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and vague statements. Give one clear reason and a concrete example. Use linking words (for example, because) to make your explanation coherent. Also correct minor grammar issues (e.g., 'they are more developed' → 'I find them more developed').

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing views in other countries because they often offer more architectural variety and well-preserved landmarks. For example, when I visited Italy, I enjoyed photographing historic plazas and modern waterfronts that provided very different and photogenic scenes.

× I enjoy capturing nature and umm, I like to take mesmerizing pictures of different views.

✓ I enjoy capturing nature, and I like to take mesmerizing pictures of different views.

The original sentence had unnecessary filler words and punctuation issues rather than a present participle error. 'Enjoy capturing' correctly uses the present participle; remove extra fillers and insert a comma before the conjunction to make the sentence clear and grammatically correct. Suggestion: Omit filler sounds and use a comma before 'and' when joining two independent clauses.

× I prefer capturing urban areas more as there is a wide cultural diversity and captivating modern architecture including museums, skyrise buildings, umm there is a vibrant nightlife, bars, cafes, uh, a variety of colors that make it more captivating for me.

✓ I prefer capturing urban areas more, as there is wide cultural diversity and captivating modern architecture, including museums and skyscrapers. There is also a vibrant nightlife with bars and cafes, and a variety of colors that make it more captivating for me.

The sentence was long and lacked proper punctuation; 'skyrise buildings' is nonstandard—use 'skyscrapers'. Break into shorter sentences and add articles and conjunctions correctly. Ensure parallel structure: 'including museums and skyscrapers' and separate ideas with commas or periods for clarity. Suggestion: Use standard vocabulary ('skyscrapers'), break long sentences, and maintain parallel lists.

× I prefer other countries more as compared to Pakistan.

✓ I prefer other countries to Pakistan.

The phrase 'as compared to' is wordy and awkward here. Use 'prefer X to Y' for comparisons. Also 'prefer other countries more as compared to Pakistan' has redundancy with 'more' and 'as compared to.' Suggestion: Use direct comparative structure: 'prefer A to B.'

× Uh, whenever I visit other countries, they are more developed.

✓ Whenever I visit other countries, they seem more developed.

Saying 'they are more developed' lacks a clear comparison structure and can sound absolute. Use 'seem more developed' to indicate perception. This also improves register for spoken response. Suggestion: Use 'seem' or 'appear' when stating impressions.

× There are is more variety, uh, there is more development as compared to Pakistan.

✓ There is more variety and more development compared to Pakistan.

The original contains a mixed 'there are is' which is ungrammatical. Use 'there is' for uncountable 'variety' and singular conceptual 'development.' Remove fillers and use 'compared to' instead of 'as compared to.' Suggestion: Eliminate redundant words and choose correct 'there is/there are' based on the noun that follows.

× So I enjoy there more.

✓ So I enjoy visiting there more.

The original sentence 'I enjoy there more' is missing a verb phrase describing what is enjoyed. Adding 'visiting' clarifies the intended action and corrects the sentence structure. Suggestion: Include the appropriate verb when referring to an activity (e.g., 'visiting there' or 'being there').