Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar, clarity and vocabulary; respond directly with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and precise nouns; avoid redundancy and keep within 3–4 sentences. Specifically: use plural/singular correctly (photos, places), correct verb tenses (I enjoyed or I photographed), and provide concrete details (what made the castle landscape interesting). Use linking words like “for example” to connect the topic sentence to the detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different places because I like discovering new scenes and perspectives. For example, last year I photographed a colorful castle landscape with ivy-covered walls and dramatic light at sunset, which made the scene feel magical.

Sugerencia: Clarify preference with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and coherent supporting details. State reasons concisely and use linking words (because, so, therefore). Avoid unclear phrases and fix collocations (rural areas, fresh air, less light pollution). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because they usually offer quieter surroundings and clearer air. For example, the open fields and low light pollution make the views fresher and more relaxing compared with busy city streets.

Sugerencia: Give a direct, logical answer and accurate reasons. Correct pronouns and word choice (my country, other countries), explain why (familiarity, cultural connection, unique landmarks) and avoid vague words like “salinity.” Use linking words (because, so) and provide one concrete example. Limit to 2–3 clear sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to its culture and landscapes. For instance, exploring the historic cityscape in my hometown excites me because I recognize the architecture and local stories, which other countries do not offer me as easily.

× Yes, I enjoy taking photo of different pairs because it's excited to discover new plays and new scenes.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different places because it's exciting to discover new places and new scenes.

Multiple errors: 'photo' should be plural 'photos' (count noun), 'pairs' is incorrect — likely meant 'places', and 'it's excited' is incorrect use of adjective; we need 'it's exciting' to describe an experience. Also 'plays' should be 'places'. Suggestion: use correct nouns and use the adjective 'exciting' to describe what causes excitement.

× For example, last year I live photographing castle landscape and cults and colorful.

✓ For example, last year I photographed castle landscapes that were colorful.

Tense and word choice errors: 'last year' requires past tense 'photographed' not present 'live'. 'Castle landscape' should be plural or 'castle landscapes'. 'Cults' is incorrect in context; likely intended 'colors' or 'cultures' but 'colorful' describes landscapes, so rephrase 'that were colorful'. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past actions and choose appropriate nouns and modifiers.

× I prefer rural area because they usually have beautiful when open to see the wheel other side from the window.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they usually have beautiful views when you look out the window.

Singular/plural mismatch and missing noun: 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match 'they'. 'Have beautiful' lacks a noun; add 'views'. The original also contains awkward phrase 'open to see the wheel other side' which I interpreted as 'when you look out the window'. Suggestion: ensure noun number agreement and include the correct noun after 'beautiful'.

× This atmosphere is very fast and the air is clear.

✓ This atmosphere is very peaceful and the air is clear.

'Fast' describes speed and is not appropriate for 'atmosphere'; likely intended 'peaceful' or 'calm'. Suggestion: choose adjectives that logically describe the noun; 'peaceful' fits rural atmosphere.

× It lights pollution does make me.

✓ Light pollution does not affect me.

Ungrammatical word order and article/word choice: 'It lights pollution does make me' is incorrect. Correct meaning likely 'Light pollution does not affect me' or 'Light pollution does not bother me.' Use subject 'Light pollution' and correct verb phrase 'does not affect/bother me.' Suggestion: use clear subject-verb-negation structure.

× I prefer to view our country because it's a new place.

✓ I prefer to view my own country because it feels familiar.

Meaning and pronoun: 'our country' may be okay but 'it's a new place' contradicts preferring own country. Also 'prefer to view' is awkward; better 'prefer to visit or see' or 'view my own country because it feels familiar.' Tense isn't wrong but sentence is semantically inconsistent. Suggestion: pick wording that matches intended meaning; if preferring own country, describe familiarity or attractions.

× It made me feel excited to see new salinity and the beautiful, especially city view.

✓ It makes me feel excited to see new scenery and beauty, especially city views.

Word choice and tense: 'made' past conflicts with present preference 'I prefer'; use 'makes' for general truth. 'Salinity' is wrong word; likely 'scenery'. 'the beautiful' is incomplete; use 'beauty'. 'city view' should be plural 'city views' or 'the city view.' Suggestion: use correct nouns ('scenery', 'beauty') and maintain consistent tense.

× A different country is very it is.

✓ A different country is very interesting.

Unclear and redundant structure 'is very it is'. Replace with a clear adjective such as 'interesting' to convey that foreign countries are appealing. Suggestion: use a single clear adjective to complete the sentence.