Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more grammatically accurate. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear words (e.g., “pills”) and incorrect articles or verb forms. Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because each angle gives a unique result. For example, a sunrise shot looks very different from the same scene at noon, so I like to try various perspectives to capture different moods.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details and linking words. Use correct prepositions and nouns (e.g., “in urban areas,” “more active,” “variety of buildings”). Limit to up to five sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in urban areas. Urban scenes are more active and offer a greater variety of buildings and street life, so I can find more interesting subjects to photograph. For instance, I enjoy capturing contrasts between modern skyscrapers and old neighborhoods.

Sugerencia: Make your meaning precise and use correct verb forms and articles. Start with a clear statement (e.g., “I prefer views in other countries”), then give specific reasons and one short example. Use linking words like “because” and “for example.”

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because the scenery and culture are more novel to me. For example, photographing markets in a foreign city exposes me to different colors and architecture, which helps me broaden my perspective and develop new ideas.

× I like to take a picture of a different pills because it depends on the outcome or picture.

✓ I like to take pictures of different places because it depends on the outcome or the picture.

Original has quantifier and noun number errors: 'a picture' vs plural 'pictures' and 'a different pills' mixes singular article with plural noun. Also 'pills' is likely a word choice error for 'places' given context. Use plural 'pictures' when speaking generally and remove incorrect article. Suggestion: choose the correct noun and match singular/plural (e.g., 'take pictures of different places').

× So I prefer to various views.

✓ So I prefer various views.

Unnecessary 'to' before 'various views' is incorrect. 'Prefer' as a verb can take a noun phrase directly: 'I prefer various views.' Remove the extra 'to' to correct the structure.

× Because we can choice that.

✓ Because we can choose them.

'Choice' is a noun; the correct verb is 'choose'. Also 'that' is vague and should agree in number with 'views' so 'them' is better. The sentence also began with 'Because' as a fragment; in spoken answers it's acceptable, but grammatically complete form is 'We can choose them.' Suggest using 'We can choose them' or join previous sentence for fluency.

× Uh, it depends on locations, but I prefer to urban area because it is more activate and can see variety buildings and scenes.

✓ Uh, it depends on the location, but I prefer urban areas because they are more active and you can see a variety of buildings and scenes.

Multiple errors: 'depends on locations' should be 'depends on the location' (use singular or 'on the locations' with article). 'Prefer to urban area' is incorrect; use 'prefer urban areas' or 'prefer the urban area.' 'Activate' is an adjective misused; correct is 'active.' 'Can see variety buildings' needs subject and articles: 'you can see a variety of buildings.' Also ensure plural agreement: 'they are more active.'

× Actually I preview in other country because in my opinion it's very familiar in my country.

✓ Actually I prefer other countries because, in my opinion, my country feels very familiar to me.

'Preview' is wrong form; likely intended 'prefer.' Use correct verb 'prefer' (present). 'In other country' needs plural or article: 'other countries' or 'another country.' 'It's very familiar in my country' is awkward: better 'my country feels very familiar to me.' This clarifies meaning and corrects preposition use.

× So I want to experience other things and I can develop my thoughts and broaden.

✓ So I want to experience other things and develop my thinking and broaden my perspectives.

'Develop my thoughts' is unnatural; 'develop my thinking' or 'develop my ideas' is better. 'Broaden' needs an object: 'broaden my perspectives' or 'broaden my horizons.' Also removing redundant 'I' before second verb makes the sentence smoother: 'and develop... and broaden...'.