Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Shorten and focus your answer. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "different kinds of emotions and feelings" and replace them with precise descriptions.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often capture sunsets because their warm colors create a peaceful mood, and I share them on social media to inspire friends. Also, I like photographing city lights at night because they show the city’s energy and contrast beautifully with the dark sky.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct statement of preference, then give two specific reasons connected with linking words. Clarify what "unique architectures" means with an example and avoid repeating vague benefits like "a sense of calmness" without explanation.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views. Firstly, cities have distinctive architecture, such as modern glass skyscrapers and historic facades, which look dramatic in photos. Secondly, I enjoy photographing city lights at night because the illuminated streets and reflections create a calm, cinematic atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer then support it with specific examples and reasons. Explain what you mean by "fresh perspective" and name one or two types of unique places you have visited or would like to visit to make your response concrete.

Ejemplo: I usually prefer views in other countries because traveling exposes me to different cultures and landscapes. For instance, I enjoyed photographing colorful markets in Morocco and dramatic fjords in Norway; these scenes broaden my outlook and inspire new creative ideas.

× I love taking pictures of different sceneries such as the sunset or the city lights, and I love sharing it on social media because it gives you different kinds of emotions and feelings while watching the pictures I took.

✓ I love taking pictures of different scenery such as sunsets or city lights, and I love sharing them on social media because they give you different emotions and feelings when you look at the pictures I took.

Original errors: 'sceneries' is incorrect because 'scenery' is an uncountable noun; use 'scenery' or plural countable forms like 'scenes'. 'the sunset' and 'the city lights' are acceptable but more natural as plural general references: 'sunsets' and 'city lights'. Pronoun agreement: 'sharing it' refers to plural 'pictures', so use 'sharing them'. Similarly, 'it gives you' should be 'they give you' to agree with plural 'pictures'. Also 'while watching' is better as 'when you look at' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: match countability (use uncountable or correct plural), ensure pronouns agree in number, and prefer natural collocations like 'look at' or 'when you look at'.

× Well, I mostly prefer the views in urban areas because we can see unique architectures of buildings and also I really appreciate UMM city lights at night because it gives us a sense of calmness.

✓ Well, I mostly prefer the views in urban areas because we can see unique building architecture, and I really appreciate UMM city lights at night because they give us a sense of calm.

Original errors: 'architectures of buildings' is awkward — 'building architecture' or 'architectural styles' is correct. 'Architecture' is usually uncountable when referring to the style; if plural, use 'architectural styles'. 'UMM city lights' is treated as plural, so the verb should be 'they give', not 'it gives'. 'a sense of calmness' is grammatically correct but 'a sense of calm' is more natural. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('building architecture', 'architectural styles'), ensure subject-verb agreement for plural subjects, and prefer concise noun phrases ('a sense of calm').

× Well, I mostly prefer the views in other countries because it gives me a fresh perspective in life and also I know that there are a lot of unique places in different countries that I have been to.

✓ Well, I mostly prefer the views in other countries because they give me a fresh perspective on life, and I know that there are many unique places in different countries that I have been to.

Original errors: Pronoun agreement — 'it gives me' should be 'they give me' to agree with plural 'views'. 'A fresh perspective in life' is acceptable but 'on life' is the more common collocation. 'A lot of' is informal; 'many' is preferable in this context though 'a lot of' is not strictly wrong. The clause 'places in different countries that I have been to' is fine but ensure clarity; consider 'places in other countries that I have visited' for smoother formal phrasing. Suggestion: ensure plural pronoun agreement, use common prepositional collocations ('perspective on life'), and consider using 'visited' instead of 'been to' for formality.