Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: まずは正しい文法と語順を意識して、簡潔な主題文（Yes, I do. / No, I don’t.）で始めましょう。次に、写真を撮る理由を1～2つの具体的な詳細で補足します。接続詞（because, and, so）を使って文をつなぎ、曖昧な語（picoresなど）を正しい語（places, scenes, backgrounds）に置き換えてください。発音や流暢さの改善には短くはっきりした文を心がけ、同じ意味の語を繰り返さないようにしましょう。例：主題文→理由→具体例の順で2～3文でまとめる。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because they make me feel calm and help me remember special moments. For example, I often take photos of sunsets at the beach to capture the colors and the peaceful atmosphere.

Sugerencia: まず語彙の誤用を直しましょう（underwearは不適切）。質問には明確に答え（Urban or rural）を示し、その理由を1〜2文で述べます。理由は具体的に（建物、交通、自然、静けさなど）述べ、接続詞（because, so, and）で論理的に繋いでください。文は短く、情報を詰め込み過ぎないこと。発音や流暢さを上げるために一文ごとに区切って話す練習をしましょう。

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy the peace and natural scenery. For instance, in the countryside I can take clear photos of fields and mountains without noise or crowds.

Sugerencia: 質問にはまず直接答える（I prefer views in my own country / other countries）こと。理由は具体的に、比較（in my country... while in other countries...）や例（landmarks, seasons, culture）を用いて説明してください。不明確な語や文（debut, kilo onions, Bigfootなど）は避け、話す前に言いたい点を整理してから答える練習をしてください。接続詞（while, because, although）で比較を示すと良いです。

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best places and their seasons well. For example, I love visiting local parks in summer when the flowers bloom, while foreign places can be interesting but less familiar.

× Yes, I like to taking picture of the behind the picores.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of the scenery behind the pictures.

The verb 'like' can be followed by a gerund (verb + -ing) or an infinitive; here the correct and natural form is the gerund 'taking'. Also 'to taking' is incorrect because it mixes infinitive marker with gerund. 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' when speaking generally. 'Behind the picores' is unclear and likely intended as 'behind the pictures' or 'the scenery behind the pictures'; choose the correct noun to convey meaning.

× Uh, it feel me happy and lonely, man that you mean memory.

✓ Uh, it makes me feel happy and lonely; it is a memorable moment.

The verb 'feel' needs a subject and should be used with 'make' in the causative sense: 'it makes me feel'. 'Feel me happy' is incorrect word order. 'Man that you mean memory' is ungrammatical and unclear; 'it is a memorable moment' conveys intended meaning. Use a semicolon or conjunction to connect related clauses.

× Uh, but it's also, uh, become a a special.

✓ Uh, but it also becomes something special.

'Become' needs proper tense and subject: 'it also becomes' (present simple) fits the conversational tense. The phrase 'a a special' is ungrammatical; use 'something special' or 'a special moment'. Remove duplicate article.

× Uh, I like underwear because I can't feel the hairs under the makes me happy.

✓ Uh, I like urban areas because I can feel the energy there; it makes me happy.

The original 'underwear' is a wrong word (likely 'urban area'). 'I can't feel the hairs under the makes me happy' is nonsensical and contains wrong pronoun/reference. Clarify meaning: if the student meant urban areas, 'I like urban areas because I can feel the energy there; it makes me happy' is a coherent correction. Ensure pronouns refer clearly to nouns ('there' refers to 'urban areas').

× It's awesome. It's my daily stuff.

✓ It's awesome. It's part of my daily routine.

'Daily stuff' is informal and vague; 'part of my daily routine' is a clearer, grammatically natural phrase. 'It's' is fine but the noun phrase should match register.

× I like uh. Or an alike own country.

✓ I like my own country.

The fragment 'I like uh. Or an alike own country.' is ungrammatical. Use a complete simple sentence 'I like my own country.' 'Alike' is incorrect here; use 'similar' or rephrase, but likely the intended meaning is 'my own country.'

× I prefer own debut because why can't they harvest all of the beautiful beautiful summer kilo onions?

✓ I prefer my own country because they can enjoy all the beautiful summer produce.

'Own debut' is incorrect word choice; probably 'own country' was intended. The clause 'why can't they harvest all of the beautiful beautiful summer kilo onions?' is ungrammatical and confusing. Replace with 'they can enjoy all the beautiful summer produce' to express preference and reason. Remove redundant 'beautiful' repetition.

× Tokyo it's warms up.

✓ Tokyo warms up.

Using both 'Tokyo' and 'it's' is redundant; choose subject + verb: 'Tokyo warms up.' Also 'warms up' is present simple third-person singular and requires correct subject-verb agreement.

× Bigfoot, have you?

✓ Have you been there?

'Bigfoot, have you?' is nonsensical in this context. If the speaker is asking whether the listener has visited Tokyo, 'Have you been there?' or 'Have you visited Tokyo?' is appropriate. Formulate a full question with auxiliary verb 'have' and past participle 'been' or 'visited'.