Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Reduce fillers (uh, umm) and avoid repetition ("because" used several times). Add a brief example of a memorable photo to make your answer more vivid.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I prefer landscapes to selfies because scenery helps me capture memories and share them on Instagram. For example, last year I took a sunset photo at a lake that reminded me of a peaceful family trip.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and then add one or two specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid fragmented sentences and unclear phrasing like "I would I'm suffering". Replace vague statements with concrete examples of how rural views relax you.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I love being surrounded by nature, which feels peaceful and helps me relax after a busy day. For instance, walking through a quiet forest or sitting by a river calms my mind and reduces stress.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and then explain briefly. Avoid stuttering and repetition. If you like both, say so and give a reason why, or mention a limitation such as lack of travel experience and a plan or desire to explore more. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I like views in both my own country and abroad. However, I haven't had many opportunities to travel around my country, so I especially want to explore local landscapes first to learn more about my culture and scenery.

× I don't like to take a picture of myself and because umm, I prefer to take a picture of the two different views because it keeps memories and I like to post it on my Instagram.

✓ I don't like to take pictures of myself, and I prefer to take pictures of different views because they keep memories and I like to post them on my Instagram.

Pronoun and noun number consistency: 'a picture' vs 'pictures' should match; 'the two different views' is unclear and unnecessary—use 'different views'. 'It keeps memories' is incorrect because 'memories' is plural, so use 'they keep memories'. Also replace 'it' with 'them' to refer to 'pictures'. Ensure pronoun reference is clear and number agreement is correct.

× I prefer views in rural areas because I love nature and I think it's so peaceful and it really relax my mind.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I love nature and I think it's so peaceful and it really relaxes my mind.

Subject-verb agreement: the dummy subject 'it' requires the verb in third person singular 'relaxes'. Use 'relaxes' not 'relax'. This matches present-tense statement about a general truth.

× You know, every day I have I would I'm suffering so I need relax.

✓ You know, every day I'm suffering, so I need to relax.

Sentence contains extra words and incorrect verb forms. Remove unnecessary 'I have I would' and use correct continuous present 'I'm suffering'. Add infinitive with 'to' in 'to relax' and punctuation to separate clauses.

× I. I prefer views in my own also own country and also other countries.

✓ I prefer views in my own country as well as in other countries.

Redundant and awkward phrasing: remove repeated 'own' and restructure to 'my own country as well as in other countries' for correct parallelism and clarity. Maintain present simple 'prefer' for general preference.

× And umm, I didn't have much, uh, opportunities to travel around my country.

✓ And I haven't had many opportunities to travel around my country.

Use present perfect 'haven't had' to describe life experience up to now rather than simple past 'didn't have'. Also use 'many' with countable noun 'opportunities' instead of 'much'. Remove filler words for clarity.