Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and vary sentence structures. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (when/how you take photos, what kinds of moments you capture). Avoid repetition (e.g., “picture/pictures” and “taken” used several times). Use linking words like "for example" or "because" to connect ideas naturally.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because each image preserves a moment. For example, I often take landscape shots at sunrise to capture the colours and mood, so years later I can remember how the scene felt.

Sugerencia: Clarify your meaning and avoid vague or contradictory phrases. Give a single clear reason, then support it with a specific detail or short example. Use linking words like "because" and "for example". Avoid phrases like "sense of all" or mixing 'art' and 'not authentic' which are unclear.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they feel closer to nature. For example, I like photographing quiet fields and old cottages where textures and natural light create a peaceful, authentic atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Make your response grammatically correct and focused. Start with a clear topic sentence: state your preference, then give one or two concise reasons with specific examples (heritage sites, landscapes, festivals). Avoid contradictory or confusing statements like 'unexplored by most foreigners' and 'has been explored... by many foreigners.'

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing views in my own country, India, because it offers diverse heritage and vibrant scenes. For instance, I enjoy capturing temple architecture and colourful festivals that reflect local culture and history.

× So by clicking a picture you are capturing the moment which can be seen days or decades after the picture has been taken so that we could recall the memory.

✓ So by taking a picture you capture a moment that can be seen days or decades later so that we can recall the memory.

Multiple issues: 'clicking a picture' is informal; prefer 'taking a picture'. The subordinate clause used past participle 'has been taken' is unnecessary with present relevance; use simple present 'can be seen' and 'later'. 'Could' is inappropriate for general ability—use 'can'. Also streamline relative clause: 'that' instead of 'which' for restrictive clause. Suggestion: use concise, present-tense statements for general truths and replace informal verbs.

× I prefer views in rural areas because rural areas are so attached to the nature and it also has an art, not an authentic feel, rather than having an artificial feel that can be seen in the urban areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they are closely connected to nature and have an artistic, authentic feel rather than the artificial feel often seen in urban areas.

Errors: 'attached to the nature' is incorrect preposition article usage — use 'connected to nature'. 'It also has an art' is ungrammatical; use 'have an artistic, authentic feel'. 'That can be seen in the urban areas' is wordy; 'often seen in urban areas' is clearer. Ensure plural agreement: 'rural areas... have'. Suggest avoiding redundant words and choose correct prepositions and articles.

× And also the rural areas also consist of a sense of all.

✓ Also, rural areas have a strong sense of community.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and vague. 'Rural areas also consist of a sense of all' has wrong verb choice 'consist of' and 'a sense of all' is meaningless. Use plural subject with plural verb like 'have'. Provide a concrete noun phrase 'a strong sense of community' to convey intended meaning. Suggest rephrasing unclear ideas into specific descriptions.

× Well, I prefer using my own country, India, because India is a beauty, a city that is unexplored by most of the foreigners and which is a developing country which has been explored and often shown to shown up by many foreigners as well.

✓ Well, I prefer my own country, India, because it is beautiful, has many places unexplored by most foreigners, and is a developing country that attracts many visitors.

Pronoun and noun errors: 'I prefer using my own country' should be 'I prefer my own country'. 'India is a beauty, a city' is wrong—India is a country. Use 'it is beautiful'. 'Most of the foreigners' should be 'most foreigners' (no article). 'Which is a developing country which has been explored and often shown to shown up by many foreigners' is confused and ungrammatical; simplify to 'is a developing country that attracts many visitors' or state 'is often visited by foreigners'. Suggest using clear pronouns ('it') and avoiding redundant relative clauses.

× And yeah, because it has its own heritage.

✓ And yes, it has its own heritage.

Minor issues: 'yeah' is informal; use 'yes' in a test. The clause is fine but ensure concise response. 'Has' is correct for third-person singular. Suggest using more formal connectors and integrating this into a fuller sentence if needed.