Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and non-native phrases like “gives me chill” and “gives me a scene.” Use one or two supporting details with linking words. For example, say why you enjoy it (relaxation, creativity, memories) and give a brief example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me relax and captures interesting moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes to remember peaceful evenings and practice my composition.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and provide specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid vague or incorrect phrases like “serious no pollutions” and “on the life is just giving relaxing.” Give one or two concrete details (e.g., fresh air, natural scenery) and a short example.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because the air is cleaner and the landscapes are more peaceful. For instance, I like photographing rice terraces and quiet country roads where there is less noise and pollution.

Sugerencia: Give a direct opinion and support it with specific reasons and one brief example. Remove filler words like “umm” and avoid vague comments such as “it's OK.” Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., because, for example, although).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultures and landscapes that I haven't seen before. For example, I would love to photograph European architecture and Japanese gardens to compare them with the beaches and countryside in the Philippines.

× Yeah, yeah, I like taking pictures in different views because it gives me chill.

✓ Yeah, yeah, I like taking pictures of different views because it gives me a sense of calm.

The phrase 'gives me chill' is not natural English; 'chill' is informal and used as a noun rarely in this sense. 'Different views' should use 'of' not 'in'. Use a noun phrase like 'a sense of calm' or adjective 'relaxing' to convey the meaning. Suggestion: say 'gives me a sense of calm' or 'is relaxing.'

× It gives me a scene, it makes me relax.

✓ It creates a scene and makes me relax.

Using two short clauses joined by a comma is a run-on; 'gives me a scene' is awkward. Use a verb that fits the context: 'creates' or 'provides' a scene. Also connect with 'and' to form a compound predicate. 'Makes me relax' is acceptable, but 'helps me relax' is more natural. Suggestion: 'It creates a scene and helps me relax.'

× Prefer the views from the rural areas because it has more serious no pollutions on the life is just giving relaxing.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because there is less pollution and life is more relaxing.

Multiple issues: missing subject 'I' and incorrect article/use of plural nouns. 'Prefer' needs subject. 'Rural areas' is fine, but 'from the rural areas' is awkward; use 'in rural areas.' 'It has more serious no pollutions' is ungrammatical: use 'there is less pollution' (uncountable). 'Life is just giving relaxing' is wrong word choice and form; use 'life is more relaxing.' Suggestions: include subject, use 'less pollution', and use comparative 'more relaxing.'

× For me, I prefer the views from other country because umm in the Philippines the views are just, it's OK, but we can umm, I just want to see the views on the other country.

✓ For me, I prefer the views in other countries because in the Philippines the views are okay, but I want to see scenery in other countries.

Problems: 'the views from other country' lacks plural and article; use 'other countries' or 'another country.' 'It's OK' is fine but avoid repetition; 'we can' is unnecessary and vague. 'See the views on the other country' uses wrong preposition and article. Use 'in other countries' or 'in another country.' Suggestions: make nouns plural when generalizing, remove filler words, and use correct prepositions ('in').