Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Старайтесь формулировать ответ более грамотно и плавно: используйте корректные времена и согласование, избегайте тавтологии и лишних слов. Начните с простого утверждения, затем дайте одну-две конкретные причины и завершите упоминанием сопровождающих людей. Также исправьте грамматические ошибки (например, "makes me smile", "I like doing it with my family or friends").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it makes me smile and lifts my mood. For example, when I visit the seaside I often photograph the shoreline to capture the light and colors. I usually do this with my family or friends, which makes the experience more fun.

Sugerencia: Работайте над ясностью и связностью высказывания: давайте чёткий ответ и подкрепляйте его конкретной причиной с использованием связующих слов (например, "because", "for example"). Уберите повторения и исправьте местоимения и порядок слов. Также используйте релевантную лексику для описания городской среды (например, "architecture", "cityscape").

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I find the architecture and cityscape very interesting. For example, I enjoy photographing skyscrapers and busy streets since they offer dynamic compositions. I also like to go out with friends to explore new neighborhoods.

Sugerencia: Фокусируйтесь на чётком выражении предпочтения и объяснении причины: используйте связки и конкретные сравнения. Избегайте обрывочных предложений и неверной грамматики (например, "other countries", "they look different"). Дайте один ясный пример, почему заграничные виды вам кажутся более привлекательными.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often look different and offer new scenery. For example, when I travel abroad I enjoy photographing unique architecture and landscapes that I don't see at home. Travelling broadens my perspective and inspires my photography.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because it makes me happy and make smile on my face.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because it makes me happy and makes a smile appear on my face.

The sentence contains inconsistent verb forms and missing auxiliary. 'Like' + gerund (taking) is correct. However, 'it makes me happy and make smile on my face' has two errors: 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it', and 'make smile on my face' is unidiomatic. Use 'makes a smile appear on my face' or 'makes me smile'. Suggestion: use parallel verb forms and correct subject-verb agreement: 'it makes me happy and makes me smile.'

× I like it do it with my family or friends.

✓ I like to do it with my family or friends.

The structure 'like' can be followed by a gerund or an infinitive. 'I like it do it' is incorrect. Use the infinitive 'to do' or the gerund 'doing': 'I like doing it with my family or friends.' The error arises from incorrect verb form after 'like' and a duplicated pronoun 'it'.

× I think I prefer you see in urban.

✓ I think I prefer what you see in urban areas.

The original uses 'you see' incorrectly where a noun clause or noun phrase is needed. Also 'urban' should be 'urban areas'. Better: 'I prefer the views you see in urban areas' or 'I prefer what you see in urban areas.' The problem is incorrect pronoun/reference and missing noun form for 'urban'.

× I think it's so interesting and wonderful, amazing.

✓ I think it's so interesting, wonderful, and amazing.

The list of adjectives needs proper coordination and commas. Use 'and' before the final adjective and consistent punctuation. The original had a comma splice and a missing conjunction.

× I it makes me I happy because I I happen with friends.

✓ It makes me happy because I hang out with friends.

Multiple issues: unnecessary repeated pronouns 'I', incorrect verb 'happen' instead of 'hang out', and wrong word order 'I it makes me I happy'. Correct sentence uses subject 'It' with verb 'makes' and 'hang out' for spending time with friends. Ensure no repeated words and correct verb choice.

× I prefer views in other country because I think.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I think so.

'Other country' requires plural 'other countries' or 'another country' with an article. Also the sentence ends oddly with 'because I think.' Add 'so' or complete the clause. Use 'other countries' to indicate views outside one's own country.

× It's look like more than in my country.

✓ They seem to have more variety than those in my country.

'It's look like' is incorrect: use 'it looks like' or better 'they seem to have'. Also compare plural 'views' so use 'those in my country' and clarify 'more variety' or 'more attractions'. The error is incorrect verb form and improper comparative structure.

× I love travel because my opinion building on this means.

✓ I love to travel because, in my opinion, this contributes to my experiences.

The original is ungrammatical: 'my opinion building on this means' is meaningless. Use 'in my opinion' for stating views and restructure to express reason: 'this contributes to my experiences' or 'this is why I love traveling.' The error is incorrect clause structure and word choice.