Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more fluent and avoid fillers and grammar mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 2–3 specific supporting details with linking words. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'I like taking pictures' not 'I like to taking') and avoid repeating words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views. For example, I often photograph mountain landscapes and rainy scenes because I love the dramatic light and atmosphere. I also take pictures of rural life and family occasions, such as birthday parties, to preserve special memories.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly: state your preference in one sentence, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'It depends on my situation', 'I prefer both, but usually rural areas'). Reduce hesitation and keep 2–3 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation, but usually I prefer rural views. Because I work all week, when I have a day off I go to quiet countryside spots to relax and enjoy nature's beauty. In the city I like the architecture, but rural areas help me unwind.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer first, then provide specific reasons and one example. Fix grammar and pronoun errors (e.g., 'I have only one day off' not 'I got only a one day off'; 'I prefer views in my own country'). Avoid trailing off; finish your thought with a complete sentence.

Ejemplo: I usually prefer views in my own country because I only have one day off per week and like to visit nearby places for relaxation. For instance, I often go to a local lake or hilltop that is peaceful and easy to reach. If I get a longer holiday, I would consider visiting scenic places abroad.

× Definitely, I like to taking pictures of different views.

✓ Definitely, I like to take pictures of different views.

The phrase 'like to taking' mixes the infinitive 'to take' with the gerund 'taking'. Use either 'like to take' (infinitive) or 'like taking' (gerund). Here 'like to take' fits the simple preference statement; change 'taking' to 'take' to correct the verb form. Suggestion: use 'I like to take pictures' or 'I like taking pictures'.

× I like taking pictures of different scenes like mountains or a rainy season, uh, rainy season as well as I click the pictures, uh, to uh, in the rural life and the family occasions such as birthday parties and uh, many more to remember special moments.

✓ I like taking pictures of different scenes, such as mountains or rainy weather, and I also take pictures of rural life and family occasions, such as birthday parties, to remember special moments.

There are several preposition and word choice errors: 'of a rainy season' is awkward — use 'rainy weather' or 'the rainy season'; 'click the pictures to in the rural life' uses incorrect verbs and prepositions. Replace 'click' with 'take' and use 'of' after 'pictures' for subjects. Also improve punctuation and conjunctions to make the sentence clear. Suggestion: Use 'take pictures of X' and 'pictures of rural life' and join items with commas and 'and'.

× Well, it's depend upon my situation.

✓ Well, it depends on my situation.

'It' requires the third person singular verb 'depends', not 'depend'. Also 'depend upon' is correct but 'depends on' is more natural. Suggestion: Use 'it depends on' for general statements about situations.

× Like I like to prefer both muse or one area or a rural area, but uh, as I'm a working woman, so I pref, uh, when I have a day off.

✓ I like both urban and rural areas, but as I am a working woman, I prefer rural areas when I have a day off.

'Prefer' was misused with 'like to prefer' and 'muse' is incorrect (likely 'urban' or 'music' confusion). The structure should be 'I like both urban and rural areas' and 'I prefer rural areas when I have a day off.' Also 'pref' is an incomplete form; write 'prefer'. Suggestion: Use clear nouns 'urban' and 'rural' and avoid redundant 'like to prefer'.

× So I go to the silence place, which are mostly in the rural area.

✓ So I go to quiet places, which are mostly in rural areas.

'Silence place' is unidiomatic; use 'quiet place(s)'. 'Which are' does not agree with singular 'place' so change to plural 'places' and 'areas'. Also remove 'the' before 'rural area' to generalize. Suggestion: Use 'quiet places' and match plural nouns and verbs.

× So I, uh, want to, uh, see all the beauty of that nature.

✓ So I want to see all the beauty of that nature.

Extra filler commas and 'to, uh, see' are conversational; grammatically 'want to see' is correct. Also 'that nature' is slightly awkward; 'nature there' or 'that area's natural beauty' is better. Suggestion: Use 'see the natural beauty there' or 'see all the beauty of nature there'.

× Well, I'm a working woman, so I got only a one day off in a week.

✓ Well, I'm a working woman, so I only get one day off in a week.

Use present simple 'get' for regular situations instead of 'got'. 'Only a one day off' misuses the article; say 'only get one day off'. Suggestion: Use 'I only get one day off a week' or 'one day off per week'.

× So I mostly prefer to, uh, visit in my own country to going like near on my locality.

✓ So I mostly prefer to visit places in my own country near my home.

'Visit in my own country' should be 'visit places in my own country' and 'going like near on my locality' is ungrammatical. Use 'near my home' or 'near my locality'. Suggestion: Use 'visit places in my own country that are near my home'.

× So I prefer that views which give me your relaxation and peace.

✓ So I prefer views that give me relaxation and peace.

'That views' is incorrect: use 'views that' (no 'that' before plural noun) or 'those views'. 'Give me your relaxation' incorrectly mixes pronouns — use 'me' only. Remove 'your'. Suggestion: Use 'views that give me relaxation and peace' or 'views that help me relax'.

× But, uh, when I have a like, uh, office in a month or a, uh, half.

✓ But when I have work once or twice a month, I may travel farther.

The original is incomplete and unclear. 'When I have a like office in a month or a half' lacks a main clause and precise meaning. A clearer sentence: 'But when I have work once or twice a month, I may travel farther.' Suggestion: Complete the thought and specify frequency using clear time expressions.