Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct basic grammar (verb forms, articles) and avoid filler words like “uh.” Mention where and why you take photos and how you store or share them to add detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I go to the market or visit a mall, I often take a quick photo of an interesting storefront; also, during family picnics I capture landscapes and candid moments on my phone so I can keep and share those memories later.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and then two specific reasons with linking words. Fix grammar (use singular/plural, articles) and avoid repetition. Use precise vocabulary (greenery, peaceful, less crowded) and finish the thought rather than trailing off.

Ejemplo: Honestly, I prefer views in rural areas rather than urban ones because they are greener and more peaceful. For instance, rural landscapes usually have open fields and forests, which make it easier to relax; moreover, there is less noise and crowding compared with the city.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give specific reasons with linking words. Improve grammar (word order, plural forms, articles) and avoid vague phrases. Explain what about your country’s views appeals to you—landscapes, cultural variety, familiarity—and give a brief example.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to its landscapes and cultures. For example, our countryside has diverse scenery from mountains to coastlines, and there are many regional traditions and festivals that create interesting visual scenes I enjoy photographing.

× I really like taking pictures in a different view.

✓ I really like taking pictures from different viewpoints.

The original phrase 'in a different view' is unnatural; 'taking pictures' is fine but needs a correct noun phrase. Use 'from different viewpoints' to express varied perspectives. Also use plural 'viewpoints' for generality (related to singular/plural but within natural phrasing).

× for example, when I am go to the market and uh, I click one picture in the front of, uh, the mall

✓ for example, when I go to the market, I take a picture in front of the mall

The clause 'when I am go' mixes 'am' (present continuous auxiliary) with base verb 'go' — incorrect. Use simple present 'I go' for habitual action. 'I click one picture' is non-native; use 'I take a picture'. Also 'in the front of the mall' should be 'in front of the mall' (preposition correction).

× and uh, sometime I go to for uh, picnic with my family members.

✓ and sometimes I go on a picnic with my family members

Use 'sometimes' (adverb) not 'sometime'. The preposition with 'picnic' is 'go on a picnic'. The sentence describes habitual action, so present simple 'I go' is correct. Remove extra 'to for'.

× So I capture some memories on my phone.

✓ So I capture some memories on my phone

This sentence is acceptable but 'capture memories' is fine; no change needed except confirming punctuation. It uses correct verb + noun; kept for completeness. (No grammatical error that matches other listed types.)

× Honestly speak, honestly speaking, I prefer view in our rural area instead of urban area.

✓ Honestly speaking, I prefer views in rural areas rather than urban areas

Use 'honestly speaking' not 'honestly speak'. 'I prefer view' needs plural 'views' or 'the view' — plural fits general preference. 'Our rural area' is odd; use 'rural areas' in general. Use 'rather than' or 'rather than'/'instead of', and plural 'urban areas' to match.

× There are many reason for that.

✓ There are many reasons for that

Use plural 'reasons' with 'many'.

× rural areas are more greenery and more beautiful place as compared to urban areas and, uh, rural areas, uh, had.

✓ Rural areas are greener and more beautiful places compared to urban areas.

Use comparative adjective 'greener' not 'more greenery' (greenery is a noun). 'More beautiful place' should be 'more beautiful places' or 'a more beautiful place'; match number. Remove fragment 'and rural areas had' which is incomplete.

× Actually I prefer a view in my own country because my own country is a very beautiful country.

✓ Actually, I prefer views in my own country because it is a very beautiful country

Use 'views' plural for general preference. Repeating 'my own country' is redundant; replace the second with 'it'. Also add comma after 'Actually'.

× There are many kind of people live in my country.

✓ There are many kinds of people who live in my country

Use plural 'kinds' with 'many'. Add relative pronoun 'who' to connect clause. Sentence describes people who live there, so include 'who'.

× There are different kind of tradition, culture and language.

✓ There are different kinds of traditions, cultures and languages

Use plural 'kinds' and plural nouns 'traditions, cultures, and languages' to indicate variety. Also use 'of' after 'kinds'.

× So I prefer mainly in my own country and represent to my own.

✓ So I mainly prefer my own country and like to represent it

The original 'prefer mainly in my own country' misuses the verb 'prefer' which needs an object: 'prefer my own country'. 'Represent to my own' is ungrammatical — likely intended 'represent it' or 'promote it'; choose 'represent it'.